The uploads of this story are going to be put on a hold. I want to give my readers a story worth reading. As such, i am going to write a substantial part of the story down before submitting any of it. That being said, I would still like to hear any advise i can get. A story is never perfect the first time around and i am still a new writer. My biggest issue is that i'm never completely sure how to word things. So many words can be used in the space of a single sentence. Thankfully, i do know how i want this story to go. I just don't know how smooth the path to get there will be. Thank you for the support you have given me so far. I swear that it won't go to waste.

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