I'll be doing a rewrite of this story

Progress:

Prologue: 100% - Combined with Prologue V2 - Prologue - Intro and Basics

Chapter 1: 100%

Chapter 2: 0%

Chapter 3: 0%

Chapter 3.1: 0%

Chapter 4: 0%

The story has been illicitly taken; should you find it on Amazon, report the infringement.

By the way, if I made a error somewhere/was vague about something, PLEASE tell me  Thanks.

Rewritten edition is here: http://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/1045