Hey! After reviewing the story so far i decided to rewrite this story, generally because a lot of it was flawed and the character arcs and story wasn't as thoroughly done as it could have been. And so i'm doing a complete rewrite.

I am hoping to make this story better than this version, and i do still plan to eventually finish this story, in whatever form it might take.

For anyone wondering how much will change. Well... Pretty much everything? The Main character is still the same for the most part but will be portrayed differently then this. I had initially planned to have Newt after reincarnation be eventually explained over time and have him already grown up to a teenager, however considering the background i gave him initially(Which i will explain shortly) it was kind of boring? And not worth the wait to slowly learn over time.

Instead (though i won't spoil much) the first time we see Newt he is a baby. (Though not for a long time chapter wise, i don't exactly like baby perspective arcs.)

In the original, i had planned for Newt's father to be a guard and his wife would have died in childbirth. Which caused his father to despise him e.t.c. But that wasn't the only reason his father would despise him. I am planning on exploring that in the rewrite cause i like it but yeah, not a lot of depth.

Reading on this site? This novel is published elsewhere. Support the author by seeking out the original.

Outside of the MC, there will be A LOT OF CHANGES, Cynthia, however, will be the exception to that. I plan to have Cynthia(rewrite) similar to this Cynthia(Original) character wise and background wise though i will change a few things here and there. However excluding Cynthia, A bunch more characters will be introduced. Some characters from the original may pop up in the Rewrite but most probably won't, not that there is a lot of characters in this.

Story/Plot will be largely the same with some major changes in the first arc for the characters and overall progression further on.

Though i won't be branching into a bunch of characters perspective for their respective storylines, because like, that is THEIR story, we are following the main story that revolves around Newt, Newt may be intertwined with some of their storylines, or he may be a background character. He won't know everything, and he doesn't need to know everything. Though if i enjoy it enough along with the readers and it makes sense or is important to the main plot then perhaps we will follow them on their own story.

I don't have an editor or anything and i am probably not going to use AI proof reading and stuff to fix stuff. Though i might if it gets really bad and majority of people want me to, then perhaps.

In the end however, this story hasn't really gone anywhere yet so starting over isn't really that much of a leap.

I am also still studying so updates will be sporadic still.

The Prologue is up and is here: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/76497/architect-rewrite/chapter/1394880/chapter-0-prologue

Later!

~Valid