Hey everybody, sorry for the non-story post. I'm just looking for a little bit of feedback if you all are willing. Vincent's a douchebag. We all know this, and it was an intentional decision on my part to make him so. However, a common criticism I get is that I can take his pettiness a little bit too far. He can be grating and this has turned people away. I've nerfed him several times, but it's clear he could still use another patch. I don't imagine it'd be any major changes, just a line here or there to improve his characterization and make him more palatable.

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So I'm asking you all if there were any moments that tested your patience, scenes where you wanted to reach through the screen and throttle him. Maybe I can take a look at those sections and see if I can tone them down a bit. (I won't do this if I think it hinders the story. But I have already gone through and removed some lines in the early chapters where I think his hostility and pettiness is a little excessive.)

Again, sorry for the non-story post. I don't plan to do many more of these unless it's necessary.