Hey readers,

Thank you all so much for reading! For those who stuck with it, I'm very grateful. I hope you'll continue to read as we go into book 2 (entitled Sunrise City). It's going to be bigger and more exciting!

I've been reading the comments and realizing that a lot of my story might be lacking (my pacing is kind of dragging for one) so I'll definitely work on that. If you have any other suggestions, comments, complaints or any other thoughts, please don't hesitate to comment! I know I'm a novice and I'm always striving to improve, so if there was anything nagging you as you read through book 1, please comment it below (even if it's brutally honest, I can take it).

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One other thing I've noticed is that my chapters might be too short, making it so that nothing much happens each chapter (possibly) and making the pacing seem extra draggy. So my question would be: would you want to keep the current schedule or have double or triple length chapters like every 2-3 days so that chapters are longer? Please answer the poll above!

Anyways this post turned out much longer than I'd liked (just shows how I need work at pacing and succinctness lol) but thanks so much for reading! I'll see you in book 2. The first chapter will come out in a few days.