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e The sun’s light shone in a single child.He had black-short hair,and void like eyes.He was scratched everywhere in his body.He wore a simple white shirt,and short white pants.
He held a mature and smart aura around his body.
“ I have around 2 gold coins now.I hope these damn Clan Members don’t try to steal them,like they always do…”
His name was Mazir.He was a slave to the Yir Clan.The Overlords of the Yir City.If they wanted a thousand slaves,so be it.He was just a simple six years old child,who had to work in the fields of the clan almost everyday without stopping.
They only ate some strange liquid and white mushroom soup with little bread.They rarely ate meat,maybe once in a year?
The Yir City had around 100.000 Citizens living inside.Around 25.000 are slaves for the Yir Clan only.The reason they are overlords,is because they have Elemental Cultivators.And they aren’t weak at all.
Mazir dreamed to be a cultivator,thus when he was free or slept he meditated.Because of that his body was well built for his age.He was several times more mature than the usual child you see in the road.
But even so he barely reached the peak of the first layer,of the first realm,the Elemental Realm,which is only the starting realm,where you train your best elements.
The Continent is divided in seven kingdoms and a huge empire,the kingdoms are:Earth,Light,Fire,Wind,Water,Dark and Sound.
The Earth Kingdom is where Mazir currently lives.The Earth Kingdom has around 20 billion citizens,and only around 9 Billion are cultivatorsThe Continent is called the “Elemental Continent” and is around 500. million km wide and 100 million km long.The Earth Kingdom is around 10 million km wide and 5 million km long.
The Empire which rules over more than two thirds of the continent is called “Elemental Empire” and the faction who rules it is called Elemental Academy.
Mazir took out a oilament from his small pocket and spread it in his meridian points.
[The Last Descendant has reached the prefered level to open the Ancient and Mystical Locket.The Locket is opening]
Mazir’s face turned pale as he looked at the locket, he had with him since he was born.
“It can’t be…”
He murmured,and his body was sucked inside the locket,which soon disappeared.
“AaAAAAAaAAAAAaaaAAAAaaAAaAAaaa”
Mazir shouted,sometimes loud sometimes softly .In the corners of his eyes,tears started to form.
“HELP ME!”
He yelled scared.He looked below and saw only infinite darkness.Just a second before he crashed into the darkness,he stopped and softly touched the bottom.
“Where the hell am I ?”
He said while touching his buttocks.
“HELLO?!”
He shouted,but to no avail.
[The access to wake the Ancestor is not enough,please reach the third layer.]
The robotic voice sounded yet again,but Mazir obeyed.
“Well anyway,I have nothing to do.”
He sat cross-legged and closed his eyes.These two were the first phases to meditating.He took a huge breath and exhaled,he repeated this cycle several times.Before starting to open his pores.The energy around started to enter his body 20 times faster than normal.
“Amazing!In this pace I might enter the third layer in less than one week!”
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“Wait...What will I eat?”
His face suddenly turned pale and serious.Although he was used to not eating for days,a week was way too much.
[No need to worry.Food has been perpared from the outside world]
The robotic voice rang out,and a huge mountain of food appeared some meters away from Mazir.Apples,Meat,Oranges and all kinds of foods .
Mazir started to drool and jumped at the mountain of food to eat after he wiped the drool.
~Around 2 days had passed~
He had already reached the peak stage of the 2nd Layer of the Elemental Realm,which was amazing.He would probably breakthrough the next day.
[Power Level - 3rd Layer.Access-Sufficent]
Suddenly the robotic voice said and a gate appeared before Mazir,who opened his eyed wide.The gate was around 40 M wide and 20 long,with statues of skeletons and humans,and carving of pictures.
Suddenly,it started to open,with a light.From it the figure of a middle aged man appear.He had white hair and blue eyes.His skin was light brown,and his cultivation level was beyond,what Mazir could sense.
“May I ask you who you are senior?”
He asked with difficulty.
“Who am I ? I am The God Of Void,and your ancestor,Kongxu…”
Kongxu said with a ancient and powerful aura.He then continued coldly,”It seems that you didn’t undergo the ritual of a Void Clan Member...Let me do it for you.”
He raised his hand in the air and suddenly Mazir felt and extremely immense pain everywhere in his body.He screamed in pain.
“AAAA!”
And fell down in four.
***(Hours later…)
Mazir slowly opened his eyelids and murmured,”Yes...I was in this strange space.”
“Hmph,strange?You call the Ancient and Mystical Locket Strange?”
Kongxu laughed and sneered.
“Even its name is strange…”
Mazir said,but Kongxu didn’t reply,but said something completely else.
“Anyway,since now you are a full fledged Void Member you have to learn its arts.”
Mazir was just hit by angriness,”A I REMEMBER! YOU BASTARD WHY DID YOU DO THAT TO ME?!”
Kongxu just snorted and continued.”The first art any Void Clansmen learns is called “ Void Creation” .With it you can create anything you wish,if you have enough enlightenment in it.”
“As you know weapons or artifacts are divided in tiers:Common,Uncommon,Human,Mortal,Spiritual,Earth,Heaven and Hell or at least in the mortal world they are divided like this.
But these aren’t the true tiers,but for now they are the basics.But for now you have to enter a forest.From what I can tell,only this forest called “Deal” is close .”
Before Mazir could say anything back,he completely disappeared.
When he opened his eyes,he saw that he was at the mountain cliff he was previously before entering the locket.But something was different,his power had risen considerably.He looked at his Slave Crest,and it had completely disappeared.Tears of joy started to appear at the corners of his eyes,as he quickly ran towards the Deal Forest.
The Deal Forest was around 5 km wide and 3 km long.The strongest beast there was just a Elemental Rank Layer 8...