I am writing a Web Novel Similar to Chinese novels but based in India( not going to be using those cliche plots) can Seniors see this and tell me , How is it?

It was an unbearably cold morning in the year Kali Yuga, 43180, when Arav Srivastava was born in the remote village of Frost’s Edge, tucked away in the northernmost corner of the province. The wind howled through the jagged, snow-covered peaks towering over the village, biting with a chill that seemed to freeze the very air. These mountains—ancient, silent sentinels—had stood for centuries, watching over the village and its people. They protected them from the outside world, but also trapped them in a frozen wilderness.

Frost’s Edge wasn’t a place that knew luxury. There were no grand festivals, no bustling marketplaces. Life here was simple, harsh, and often unforgiving. The villagers worked the land, raised animals, and endured brutal winters, always on the edge of survival. Yet, despite the isolation, there was pride in the community. They were a tough, self-reliant people, and though life was hard, they had what they needed to get by.

The village itself was a cluster of sturdy homes made of wood and stone, their roofs heavy with snow. Narrow streets wound between them, and at the center stood a well, the source of life for the whole village, even when the cold pressed in hardest. The villagers moved about with quiet purpose, their actions steady, in tune with the land and the seasons.

On this particular morning, the sky above was a dull, lifeless grey, like it too had been drained by the cold. The wind screamed through the trees, pushing at the homes with a force that seemed to challenge everything in its path. Fresh snow lay thick on the ground, shimmering faintly in the pale light of dawn. It was the kind of morning that felt like the world was holding its breath, as if something was about to happen. But no one could have guessed what.

Inside one of the small homes, the air was thick with anticipation. The midwife, Umravati, had seen many births, but today felt different. There was a stillness in the room that made everything seem heavier. Maybe it was the cold, or maybe it was something else. Umravati was old, with hands worn and scarred from years of work, but they were steady now, moving with the practiced confidence of someone who had delivered countless babies. Yet today, she seemed more focused than usual, her gaze lingering on the baby as though there was something she was waiting for.

In the corner of the room, the father, Rajesh Srivastava, stood silently, watching. His hands were rough from years of hard labor, and his hair, dark and thick, was untamed. His eyes, though tired, were sharp, full of quiet strength. The room was small, the smell of wood smoke hanging in the air, the only sound the soft crackling of the fire. Everything outside was swallowed by the storm, but inside, time seemed to slow, as though the world itself was waiting for something.

Rajesh hadn’t expected anything unusual today—just the birth of his son, another child to carry on the family name. But something was different. The midwife, who had delivered many babies for him over the years, was moving with more urgency than usual. Every so often, she paused and glanced at the child, her brow furrowing as if there were something just beyond her understanding.

Then, the baby cried. It wasn’t a normal cry. It cut through the stillness, sharp and clear, like a sudden flash of lightning in the darkness. Umarwati, who had been tending to the birth, looked down at the child, her eyes wide.

“Rajesh,” she said, her voice soft but filled with something unshakable. “This child… there’s something about him. I can’t explain it. I feel it in my bones. He’s different.”

Rajesh’s heart skipped. “What do you mean?”

Umarwati shook her head slowly, her eyes fixed on the newborn. “I’ve seen many children born, Rajesh. Some are ordinary, just part of the flow of life. But this one… there’s something ancient in him. Older than time itself.”

Rajesh stood still, a weight settling in his chest. He gazed down at his newborn son, whose eyes were closed, his tiny chest rising and falling with each breath. The wind outside howled its mournful song, but inside the room, there was a stillness that felt like the world had paused. Something was shifting, and Rajesh didn’t know what it was yet.

The midwife handed the child to Rajesh, and for the first time, he held his son in his arms. A flood of emotions rushed through him—love, of course, but something deeper, something he couldn’t name. The baby’s small fingers wrapped around his hand, and Rajesh felt a strange connection. It was as if the child had known him, had trusted him before he even understood how. The weight of responsibility pressed down on him, but there was also awe, a quiet reverence.

The fire crackled in the corner, sending sparks up the chimney, and despite the cold that pressed against the walls, the room seemed warmer. Rajesh felt a deep bond with his son, something beyond blood, beyond family. It was as if this child was tied to something greater, something beyond their small village, beyond even the land they lived on.

“Do you feel it too?” Rajesh asked softly, his gaze never leaving the child.

Umarvati nodded slowly. “Yes. This child… he will do great things. More than we can imagine.”

Outside, the wind continued to scream, mixing with the crackling of the fire, but inside, there was only stillness. It was as though the very moment had been frozen in time, a moment that would forever mark the beginning of something much bigger than any of them could understand.

And so, the boy was born. No fanfare. No prophecy. Just a small cry in a small room, in a village far from the eyes of the world. But from that moment on, Arav Srivastava’s life would turn everything upside down. The world would never be the same again.

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**1. The Northern Province**

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This cold, mountainous region is where Arav was born. Life here is tough—villages cling to the mountainsides, and the people are accustomed to harsh winters and heavy snowfall. Only the most resilient survive in this frozen land.

**2. The Land of Snowy Slopes**

Snow-covered peaks and narrow mountain paths define this place. The people here are known for their climbing skills and their ability to endure the unforgiving cold. They’re also fierce warriors, and ancient fortresses dot the landscape as a reminder of the battles fought to defend these lands.

**3. The Land of the Rising Sun**

To the east of the Northern Province, this land wakes up with the first rays of sunlight every day. Coastal cliffs and lush valleys make it a peaceful place, where the villagers live in harmony with the spiritual power of the sun.

**4. The Land of Thirty-Six Forts**

Once a stronghold against invaders, the **Land of Thirty-Six Forts** is now a place filled with ancient ruins and stories of past conflicts. Its strategic fortresses still stand tall, a testament to the region’s military significance.

**5. The Land of Cows**

This fertile land is a paradise for cattle. The plains stretch out as far as the eye can see, and the people live simple, fulfilling lives, working the land and caring for their herds. Agriculture and dairy farming are the backbone of this region’s economy.

**6. The Land of the Gurjars**

Wide open grasslands and fortified villages make up the **Land of the Gurjars**. The Gurjars are a proud warrior tribe, known for their horsemanship, their thriving trade routes, and their stronghold cities, which serve as an important strategic location.

**7. Abode of God**

A sacred land, filled with temples and shrines dedicated to the gods. People travel from far and wide to seek divine guidance here, and the air is thick with the hum of worship and spiritual devotion.

**8. The Land of Snowy Slopes**

This place is a mix of towering snowy peaks and dense forests. Its people, living in isolation for generations, have developed a deep connection with the land and survive through age-old traditions passed down over the centuries.

**9. The Land of Forests**

Green and rich with life, this land is filled with dense forests, winding rivers, and a vibrant array of wildlife. The people here live off the land, practicing ancient rituals and maintaining a close relationship with nature.

**10. Elevated Land or Lofty Land**

High in the mountains, this land is home to isolated monasteries, temples, and peaceful cliffs. The people here are known for their wisdom, their deep spirituality, and their ability to live in the solitude of the highlands.

**11. The Land of Coconut Trees**

A tropical paradise, where coconut palms sway in the breeze and life is simple. People here rely on fishing and farming, making their living off the land’s natural resources and enjoying the easygoing life by the coast.

**12. The Central Province**

The heart of the world, where different cultures, languages, and traditions come together. Cities buzz with activity, markets brim with life, and the region is filled with political intrigue, as it’s the center of trade, diplomacy, and power.

**13. Big Nation**

A massive empire known for its might and history. This land is filled with scholars, warriors, and kings, all contributing to a culture that’s both rich and powerful. The land is vast, its economy strong, and its influence felt across many territories.

**14. The Land of Jewels**

Famous for its precious stones and gold mines, this land has long been a destination for those seeking wealth. The jewels of the region have drawn adventurers and traders, making it one of the most sought-after lands in the world.

**15. Abode of Clouds**

Shrouded in mist, this land is known for its floating cities and temples that rise above the earth. The people here live in harmony with the skies, and ancient mysteries surround the region, making it a place of wonder and spiritual reflection.

**16. The Land of the Mizos**

A rugged, hilly land, home to the Mizos, a tribe that is fiercely protective of their traditions. The people here are known for their martial skills, and the region’s dense forests and hills have provided sanctuary for many generations.

**17. The Land of the Nagas**

This is a mysterious, almost mythical place, where ancient ruins and hidden temples are scattered through the jungle. Legends of serpentine creatures and magical beings fill the air, making the land both enchanting and dangerous.

**18. The Land of the Odra People**

Known for its fertile fields and peaceful rivers, the **Land of the Odra People** is a land of art, trade, and beautiful architecture. The people here have mastered the art of farming and trade, and their cities are a reflection of their advanced knowledge.

**19. The Land of Five Rivers**

Where five mighty rivers meet, creating a fertile region that has supported powerful kingdoms and rich cities. These rivers have shaped the culture and history of the land, providing sustenance and connection to the people who live along their banks.

**20. The Land of Kings**

A regal land known for its palaces and political drama. The rulers here have shaped history for centuries, and the land is rich with stories of power, wealth, and intrigue. It’s a place where the course of kingdoms can change in the blink of an eye.

**21. New Palace**

A land filled with grand estates and palaces, **New Palace** is the seat of a powerful dynasty. Its rulers live in opulence, and the land serves as a base for their influence over the surrounding regions.

**22. The Land of the Tamils**

A place rich in culture, the **Land of the Tamils** is known for its art, music, and vibrant festivals. The temples here are grand, and the traditions go back centuries, with each generation contributing to the cultural tapestry.

**23. The Land of Telugu People**

Known for its deep cultural roots, the **Land of Telugu People** boasts remarkable architecture, fine arts, and agricultural prosperity. The people here take great pride in their heritage, and their language and literature are celebrated throughout the region.

**24. Three Cities or Land Near Water**

This region is home to three cities, each strategically located along rivers or seas. The cities are bustling centers of commerce, culture, and power, where each vies for control of the waterways that connect them.

**25. The Northern Province**

A reminder of its earlier description, this cold and isolated land is home to people who are tough, resilient, and capable of surviving in the harshest of environments.

**26. The Land of the North**

The northernmost region, where the sun barely rises above the icy ground. The people here survive through strength and resourcefulness, enduring the bitter cold and maintaining their traditions in the face of extreme isolation.

**27. Ancient Roots of Banga**

Rich in history, this land is home to ancient ruins and sacred sites that tell the story of a once-great civilization. The land holds secrets of empires long forgotten, and the remains of these once-grand cities are scattered throughout.

**28. Land of Naked People**

A simple, natural land where the people live in harmony with their surroundings. Though they lack advanced technology, their deep knowledge of the earth and natural remedies make them self-sufficient and wise.

**29. Fort of Chandi**

An impregnable stronghold, the **Fort of Chandi** is a place of legend. Its walls are said to be built from enchanted stones, and its halls are filled with the wealth and power of kings and queens who have ruled from here for generations.

**30. Dweep Island**

A mystical island, isolated from the rest of the world. Few outsiders have set foot on its shores, and it’s rumored to hold secrets of great power, with legends surrounding every part of the island.

**31. The Land of Gateway**

A strategic crossroads for travelers and traders, **The Land of Gateway** is a busy region filled with bustling markets and cities where people from all over the world converge.

**32. The Land of Kashyapa**

A land of tranquility and spiritual connection, **The Land of Kashyapa** is filled with peaceful temples, sacred groves, and people who live in harmony with the divine forces that guide them.

**33. Jambu**

A mysterious land of deep forests, winding rivers, and ancient relics. **Jambu** is filled with mystical creatures and secrets, making it a place of adventure for those brave enough to explore its hidden corners.

**34. The Land of High Passes**

A region of towering mountains and perilous paths, the **Land of High Passes** is home to traders, monks, and pilgrims who travel across its high roads to reach distant lands.

**35. One Hundred Thousand Islands**

A vast archipelago of islands, each with its own unique culture and traditions.

The **One Hundred Thousand Islands** are a place of endless exploration, where each island offers new stories and discoveries waiting to be uncovered.

**36. New Town**

A modern, fast-growing city, **New Town** is where tradition meets innovation. Its streets buzz with energy, as people build the future while honoring the past.

**37. A Small Settlement on Big House Taming Island**

An isolated village, **Big House Taming Island** is known for its towering houses and the tight-knit community that lives there. The people rely on the sea and the land to sustain them, living simple yet fulfilling lives