Lo, I don't want to be presumptuous, but I'm going to play it safe and make a discussion board. I've written a little and I love to hear comments, so when my story gets better, you guys can comment for me. I need a good dosage everyday. And for those of you that don't know, this is a publicity stunt, so my story will go to the top of the new chapters. I'll try to get in the chapters every one or two days. Comment please as the story goes on.

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