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Poll: Are the POV switches jarring/annoying?

Poll: Are the POV switches jarring/annoying?

Hello everyone!

As you guessed by the title, this is not a chapter, but something I'd like to know sooner rather than later. Depending on what you tell me, I might make the POV switches less 'automatic' like I have done in the early chapters. Meaning instead of going from one story to the other almost every chapter, you'd get 2-4 chapters in a row of one of the stories, then switch. I am currently leaning towards that personally, but I'd like to get an idea of the impact it has on people who reads as it is hard to put myself in the shoes of someone knowing nothing more than what is read. I have the whole story/universe in mind and It changes my perspective of things, if that makes sense.

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As many of you can tell, I'm new at this and still learning. English isn't actually my first language, as you might tell by some phrases that get a bit wild, but I do want to improve and learn. So feel free to give constructive criticism! I honestly feel like I take a punch in the gut for each critic, as I do want it to be perfect and I hate when it's not, but I'm not stupid enough to believe my writing is perfect. So very far from it.

I think this is also a good place to thank everyone who has read and commented/reviewed! Thank you very much, it's amazing to share my writing with all of you and I love it!

Anyways, chapter tomorrow and ohmygodIwanttospoilthingsstopwriting.