Okay so quick note, I am horrible at dialogue and have two directions I want to take this story with her mortal mother let me know in the poll above I'll wait a week before I start writing the next chapter.
-oh and if you guys can point out any grammar issues for me that would be great (English isn't my best subject -_-)
??? Pov
I watched her as she was lulled into a deep sleep by her mother's mana. I sighed deeply as I decided to give him another chance in another world. I thought about how things progressed this far.
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I watched him as he went through hardships as his life progressed. As his life was meant to be far too good he attracted jealousy from a great many people. In fact, his luck was so great that it made the gods themselves jealous to the point of trying to rob him of it. The only thing I was able to do as his mother was to hide his presence from the other gods.
I was forbidden to meet my own son for fucks sakes. It hurt to watch as his father died in front of his very eyes as well as my own. His soul seemed to leave his body at that exact moment I knew I had to take his memory. Within seconds of him giving up from watching the only family that he knew die he lost the will to live. Soon after he lost the will to live he was shot and instantly died.
Now then let's go farther back to his birth.
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I smiled at my child and that's when his father walked up to me and hugged me. "What do you think his name should be," he asked me.
"Ember," I replied.
“Why Ember,” his father asked?
My reply was, “he will be either the Sparks for salvation or he will be smothered out by the passing of time.”
He sighed as he knew the inevitable would come, “yes and I will cause either his rise or his fall as you have told me.”
I smiled sadly at him and replied, “no not your fault but the plan fate has for him is cruel always remember none of it is your fault, now I must leave before HE finds our son.”
His father starts to cry, “I'll miss you.”
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“And I you, just remember we’ll see each other again in five years.” I said as I started to fade away and handed ember to him.
-----------------------------4 years earlier------------------------------
I watched as my son started to walk around with much difficulty. I smiled sadly as I knew his fate was not meant to be peaceful. But I could let him have a few peaceful years.
I sat there and watched as Embers father helped him learn to walk and as he played with him. And as time slowly passed I saw the sadness in his eyes as we both knew he wouldn't have much time to know his son. And the time passed by quickly soon enough another year had gone by.
-----------------------------2.5 years earlier------------------------------
My son had just started to learn how to talk and he was quite the little monster when he first learned how to run if I do say so myself. His curiosity just so happened to make his father and myself cry because he just so happened to ask “daddy where’s my mommy?” I watched as his father broke down and hugged our son.
His reply was, “she's watching over us right as we speak.”
This made my cry as my son will never know his mother in this world.
-----------------------------1 year earlier------------------------------
I was starting to become a nervous wreck, the cloaking spell on ember was beginning to wear off sooner than expected. I think there are gods as strong as myself or stronger getting closer than expected to this world. I must strengthen the spell quickly.
-----------------------------6 months earlier------------------------------
Okay we're finally safe things are going how they should once more. As it turns out an Emperyon God decided to search nearby this world. Anyways Ember’s time to leave this world and move on to my home world no OUR home world.
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So now you know just how we got where we are now.
Okay so guy's whatever you choose for the poll they lead to two possible endings no matter what but some will end better than others so choose wisely.