Whelp, the prototype prologue failed, but that's why its called prototype. So I made a fresh new prologue, which has the same name as the protagonist of the previous prologue. However, their stories differ, so you can just ignore the first two prototypes. 

I took the advice the penguin who posted the comment on my past and present tense, and im trying to improve, i think. Thanks for commenting penguin

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Though I dont mean to impose, but can you tell me which prologue is better, the prototype or the new one. I would be delighted if you do

Thats all for now, thanks for reading!