Still trying to improve my writing as time go on.

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Next morning 

 At the dinner table are four people chomping down on their food. The four people is Thela, Sylvia, Henry and Melinda. Sylvia as usual is eating in a very sloppy way having food all over her face and hands. Melinda was not talking to Henry which only made him feel helpless, every since last night she hadn't interact with him.Thela on the hand where not eating her food but staring at her plate in daze,  the only thing that was on her mind is Dawn, "Sylvia are you going to play with your friends today," Melinda said suddenly. "Y-yes, Julie and Brenda suggest that we should play with their older brother," Sylvia replied excitedly with a shine in her eyes. Julie and Brenda is Sylvia best friends, their brother is Thela age, he proposed to Thela before but was rejected. His name is Kaile, he is the village prodigy reaching the Soldier stage at the age of eighteen.Thela snapping out of her daze, she  look at Sylvia with a huge grin and said " Since I will be going over there after breakfast how about I take you there instead of your father and mother" Hearing Thela suggestion, Sylvia eyes shine brilliantly, Thela is like a role model to Sylvia. Ever since Sylvia first saw Thela heal someone, she immediately wanted to become a healer mage."Yes, lets go! lets go!" immediately she grabbed Thela hands with her sticky fingers and lead her towards the door. 

 "Sylvia! Clean yourself!" Melinda shouted at her which made Sylvia flinch a little because of the sudden shout, turning around she look at her mother with pleading eyes, paying no mind towards her Melinda fold her arms against her plump chest and look firm. Reluctantly Sylvia went to her room to clean herself. After Sylvia left, Henry finally spoke"Today is Sylvia birthday, so Thela can you please make sure she is busy playing with her friends", Thela nodded. He continued "After we decorate everything, Melinda will look for you" Today is Sylvia birthday, she is now five years old, she was born on the fifteen day of Leo of 14658. On the day of a child fifth birthday they mana core in their body is fully develop and they will be able to cultivate.Melinda and Henry planned this weeks ago, while Thela keeps Sylvia busy, they would decorate everything and invite the village. In this village mostly everything is celebrated together, well since it have a population of about hundred to two hundred people.They will be celebrating her birthday at the big house, the big house can easily fit hundreds of people, the village use the big house for every child who turn five years of age. 

 Coming back from Sylvia have on a fresh new pair of clothes, her face and hands is clean, skipping towards Thela, she grab her hands "Lets go, Big sis" Sylvia said and lead her towards the door. 

 *Slam*

The door slammed shut, as if an horn sounded off Melinda and Henry immediately started to rearrange furniture, "I will gather the supplies and you go invite the other villagers, " Henry said. Agreeing to his statement, Melinda ran out the door. "*Sigh*... with her gone this should be a breeze" Henry said grinning. 

In a mean while, Inside a room is Dawn sitting up in a bed, he is shirtless showing all his upper body, his back covered with glistening sky blue scales, not only that but his long back length hair wasn't black anymore but a sky blue color and his eyes weren't there original color but azure blue with black slits in them. Breathing in fresh air he said "how long has it been since I saw daylight *sigh*. ..mmm. from the size of my body I should be at least five or six years old... so I was in a coma for five or so years. I wonder what mother will say if she see me in my halve dragon form " Willing his body his skin, eyes and hair return to normal. Trying to get up from the bed he tumbles on the floor.'...I guess I will have to get use to this body' he thought. reaching out to the legs on the nearby table he grabs it. *snap*, the leg breaks in halve ' ....' he felt hopeless, now since he fused with the water dragon queen his strengh is at least twenty times stronger than an average adult, but what use will it be if he could not control it properly. gritting his teeth he tries to stand up.After two or three attempts, he finally stand up and staggered towards door, Slipping he crash against it .A loud thud can be heard as the house rocks. Grunting sounds can be heard as Dawn is on his knees covering his face."ouch" he said. Getting up from the ground he lean against the door. 

 "Where is Henry, he should be back by now!" suddenly angry feminine voice rang out from another room. 

"I am back, we need to hurry up and decorated the big house" a masculine voice said.

 "Where have you been, we need to go! " said the feminine voice. 

 Henry: H-honey calm down, I am here am I? Go tell the others to come help us.

 Melinda: I already told them, they should be there now!

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Henry: Our daughter is there?

Melinda: No, Sylvia is still with her friends.

 Henry: Ok, after ten minutes tell Thela that we are ready.

 Melinda: Ok

Silence filled the room, after a couple minutes Dawn knew that no one is there, "Sylvia? Decoration? A birthday party? Wait.. I have a sister..... " he said, letting out a long sigh... he open his room door and wobbled out. 'Where is the big house? I guess I will have to look around' he thought. ___________________________________ 

"Thela where are we going" a girl voice sounded. After Melinda told Thela that they are ready, Thela immediately started to bring Sylvia to the big house."Sylvia we are going somewhere special" she replied. After saying this a huge house appeared in their view "What is that?" Sylvia ask, looking curious at the house." That is the place we are going to, a surprise should be in there, come lets go!" Thela said. Sylvia nodding her head ant followed Thela. 

 Appearing in front of the door, Thela look towards Sylvia and said "Go in, I will go in after you enter" showing a little hesitation, Sylvia open the door and entered. When she entered the house she notice it was completely dark " Are you sure its a surprise in here?" she said.* Slam* the door suddenly was slammed shut. Looking around, she had frighten facial expression, "Thela? Are you there?" she call out, but no one answered. 

 "Surprise!" suddenly a crowd of people yelled out, and the light turn on making her close her eyes. Opening her eyes, she can see a banner with happy birthday written on it and decorations everywhere as tons of people smiling at her. Looking through the crowd she sees her mother and father holding a cake smiling at her. Smiling she run up to them. "Mother! Father! What is this?" she ask them. 

"Its your birthday!" they said in unison," come on, blow out the candle and make a wish" Melinda said. Thinking for a while, she hesitate a little then blew out the candles. 

 "Sylvia what did you wish for?" Henry said grinning show all of his teeth. Looking at her father she hang her head down as if she were a puppy who knew it did wrong, she muttered " I wish that my brother was here" During the time she was playing with her friends big brother left a deep impression on her which only strengthen her desire to be with her brother, looking at her face he knew something was wrong because she would usually be cheerful and smiling " What did you say Sylvia" he ask in a soft voice. Shaking her head tears begin running down her face as she bend down hugging her knees " I want my brother!" she cried out. Utterly silence, every knew who she is talking about, her big brother who had been in a coma ever since she wss born, the brother who she never get the chance to play with.

 The first one to react was Thela, she is just like Sylvia but want him back for a different reason, walking up to her she bends down and touch her shoulder, whispering to her ear she said " Your mother, father want him to wake up as well, I want him as well. We have to wait patiently and hope for the best understand?"  After saying this she hug her gently. Joing them is Melinda and Henry as well as her friends Julie and Brenda. After a couple minutes of hugging, every let go Sylvia looking with teary eyes  smile and said " Ok...I will wait for big brother" as time goes by everything turn back to normal, everybody talking among themselves, Sylvia talking to her friends and Henry and Melinda is chatting with the other adults. Standing at the corner of the room is Thela, she just rejected another proposal, walking towards the nearby table she sits down, suddenly she feels a scorching hot sensation coming from her upper left arm. Pulling up her sleeve, she see the dragon symbol glowing brightly, quickly she covered it and look around trying to see who notice it. As her eyes wonder room, it locked onto a small slim male figure who had just entered through the door, this male figure is staggering with every step it take. "Dawn!?" she ask out loud catching everyone's attention. Many look at her with strange expression then followed her eyes and saw a small male figure that have snow white skin with long black hair, if it weren't for his clothes they could easily confuse this figure as her girl. "Brother?" a girl voiced throughout the room.

 When the figure heard the word "brother" he turned and look at the girl, a small smile showed on his face and said in a rather soft voice " So you are my baby sister? Well come on don't you want a hug?" like as a clap of thunder rang out in her head, she run towards him and jump into his embrace making him fall on the ground. Tears was flowing down her face as she cried out " Brother! *sniff* Brother! *sniff*" she burried her head into his small chest "Yes..yes, Happy birthday, Sylvia" Dawn said with a soft voice.

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Today's Chapter:)

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