Hi 👋 I am new to writing ✍️ novels, but I asked you guys to give me advice or ideas if you have one .

There a teenager ran thro a hallway he looks in bad mod what happened to him is that his father kick him out of the family gathering and now he runs to his room

There a teenager ran thru a hallway he looks in bad mod what happened to him is that his father kick him out of the family gathering and now he runs to his room

[Why he did that I know I don’t have any combat power but why he became so cold to me ]

He entered the room and he sat on his bed and in that moment

[What’s happening? I feel so cold and I can’t move. What are these Voices that keeps calling me?]

And then ore hero lost consciousness .

In another place .

[John why did you kicked him , if you did not have a good explanation I will tell my father and mother in law]

Who say this is a beautiful woman who look in her middle of 30s her name is Victoria

[Honey what I’m going to say I don’t want him to know .]

Who say that is a good looking man look in his 30s his name john.

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Whale he say these the four people in the room other than Victoria and John

There joulea the elder sister and Dean the middle child and Bella and lastly Ella the ungist one there age from oldest (20 ,19 16 ,15) and every one of them is a jenase but ther one who doesn’t have any talent or that what his father thinks.

[I , think to send him to stay with my father until we find the one who behind the failed assassin ]

[But dad you don’t have to be that harsh on him]

[I know joulea maybe if I show him if he doesn’t have strength he will never have a voice or can stand for himself]

[But dear you know what happened to him it is not his fault it’s the dark sin assassin fault]

[I don't care that no excuse to just give up]

[Dad stop being a stock head it’s my fault ’ if he hasn’t do what he did I will be the In he's place]

[Bella I know what you mean but ….]

In middle of his sentence the door to the room open and the one open the door is a old man and follow him is old woman

[Hahaha so you know where are coming so you waiting for us ] the old man is pule

[In ded dear ] and the old woman is gane

[Grandma and grandpa] the youngest ran to and hug them

[Hi dad it’s nice to have you here I will …]

[Shut up I don’t care about you I am her for my grandchildren and I will speak to you later about what I have heard and if it true you have a Beaten]

John was shocked and a little scared he know what his dad can do

[Welcome father and mother in law]

[Com give grandpa a hug]

And after he say that he hug the four children

[Now there one not here where is he ]

John begin to suting alute

[John where he is ]

[Dad I …..]

In that moment The door opened forcefully

And this time is the butler

[Sir , madam there was accident with the young master]

[What happened]John and Victoria say

[It seems some people snake in and use a spell on young master that when I interrupt it and then I kill 4 from 8 the other 4 run then I prtais to check on young master he was going ]

In that moment everyone in the room felt there harte sink in the stomach

We go now to our mc he was

[*Hi 👋 I feel I have to leave a note for you guys and that is ther two storey one ther is a system helping but that system not op or helping in bad moment

The second is a little dark and the system is ther but our mc can be necromancer it is your choice 👀😁]

P.s[some time I will be latein up lode ch because I work to job and Studyingso pleasebe patience with me] have a good day.