Looking back at the first volume, it's all over the place. I wrote it without having a picture of what this story will be and just wrote whatever popped into my head that day. This being my first time also didn't help a lot lol.

A lot of people have been pointing out the choices I made and I agree with them. I didn't lean too much into magic, his character is inconsistent, and other issues.

I'm thinking of completely rewriting it with different plot points. In my head, I'm thinking of making him the son of an abusive dad who is a high-ranking Church official. Plot points will be different as well, but I'll try to keep all the characters as I made plans for them after finishing the first volume.

Taken from Royal Road, this narrative should be reported if found on Amazon.

For the second volume, I'm thinking about keeping the general idea and plot points but tweaking some of the chapters to exclude his father and things like that to make it fit with the new first volume.

Do you think I should rewrite it or just keep going?

Comments are appreciated. I won't just go by the poll, but it'll help me make a decision.

Thank you for your support and reading!