Act 1: Meet & Greet - End

Soooo.... these will be the main characters driving the plot forward. Reading back through I can tell my writing style is kind of all over the place, think I made a decent attempt at making the characters believable, tho. Next act will see the characters meet each other and experience conflict that will lead to main plot, plus more info on Marduk and Anwar's past. Also will introduce sub-plot hinted at in last chapter. I sort of have the end game mapped out a bit, but still flyin by the seat of my pants as for how everyone's gonna get there.  Anyway... any suggestions? Critiques? Too dark? Not enough scenery description? Let me know :D            Thanx!  

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 -Nimo