Let me have a few minutes of your attention before you click on next chapter.

You can be very open with your comment, if my chapter is terrible, then tell me it's terrible. I don't mind it. I love knowing what you think regardless. Don't be shy, be the lastest comment!

Things I would like to know as the author, tell me why you dropped the story, "It's bad, [post your reason]". I'd love to hear your thoughts.Tell me why you liked it, tell me what ticked a reaction from you, tell me what's going through your mind. Afterall, I've spent hours writing a chapter not for silent readers, but to improve the way I write. You're allowed to drop the F word, the S word, the D word...you get my point haha. If you do so, I will be very grateful!

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- Sleepy Potato