Hello one and all it is me the humble scribe that is writing this little fan fiction, I kinda went off the deep end when I wrote the whole chapter. I am proud of that chapter in how it advanced the story before and after the action while also growing the charater of Tarphus in the brutal combat however I must admit that I was mildly disturbed with the amount of gore that I could produce.

This lead me to ask myself if the gore was appropriate, or if I should (going forward) slim it down. However, Tarphus's challenges will be as gory as I can make it, without hurling (much) of course. Now I feel some pressure as a semi-writer I wanted to make sure that this would be a good direction for my story.

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Long story short I want to put as much 40k into this as possible as I love the lore and the discriptions but I feel slightly ill of the gore that comes to mind here. Now some might think of this as me being a wuss and you might have a point however when I write I am there.

I see through the eyes of my creations I live through them their hatred is mine their fears consume me their drive heal me and their goals revive me. So when I kill off a character I feel the smoke and flashes of light etc.

So please let me know what you all think, I will do what I can to make this an enjoyable read but that will take time for me no mater what you guys choose.