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The Future At Bat
Chapter 17 Game Review

Chapter 17 Game Review

As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow over the stadium, Hiroshi Takumi adjusted the brim of his cap, ensuring his disguise was effective. He had opted for a simple coat and sunglasses, an outfit that blended in with the crowd while hiding his identity. He had not told Shinjiro he would be attending the game, wanting to observe his son without the pressure of his presence.

As the game progressed, Hiroshi noted the moments when Shinjiro excelled and when he faltered. Each swing of the bat, each catch in the outfield, was a reflection of his son's dedication and talent. Yet, Hiroshi also saw the moments of hesitation—the misjudged fly balls and the indecisive throws. It reminded him of his own struggles when he was a player, the pressure to perform weighing heavily on his shoulders.

After the game, which ended in victory for Shinjiro's team, Hiroshi slipped away from the stands, careful not to be seen. He made his way home, where he found Yumi already preparing dinner. As he entered, she looked up with a smile.

"How was the game!?" she asked, her eyes sparkling with curiosity.

"Good. Shinjiro played well," Hiroshi replied, a hint of pride in his voice. He decided to keep his disguise a secret for now, wanting to gauge Shinjiro's feelings about the game without his father's presence influencing him.

Later that evening, as they sat down for dinner, Shinjiro walked in, his expression a mix of triumph and contemplation. Yumi greeted him enthusiastically, but Hiroshi observed quietly, waiting for the right moment to engage.

"How was it out there?" Hiroshi finally asked, his tone casual.

Shinjiro shrugged, a slight frown crossing his face. "We won, but I made some mistakes. I feel like I need to change my approach at the plate."

Hiroshi nodded, recognizing the familiar struggle in his son's words. "It's all part of the game, son. You'll figure it out."

As they ate, Hiroshi felt a sense of relief wash over him. He had witnessed his son's resilience firsthand, and he knew that these experiences would shape Shinjiro into a better player. He resolved to support him more openly in the future, perhaps even revealing his secret attendance at the game when the time was right. For now, he would let Shinjiro reflect on his performance, knowing that the journey to improvement was just as important as the victories themselves.

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Shinjiro sat alone in his room, the soft glow of the desk lamp illuminating his thoughtful expression. The game against Nishinomiya Kita had been a win, but Shinjiro was preoccupied. He leaned forward, elbows resting on the desk, as he reviewed his performance in his mind.

"If this continues," he muttered to himself, "Teams are going to start studying my patterns." He knew he had been relying too heavily on his ability to predict fastballs. It had worked well enough so far, but he couldn't ignore the risk of opponents catching on and exploiting his predictability.

"I'm going to become too predictable," he mused to himself. "Maybe I should start swinging at some balls, just to keep the pitchers guessing."

He ran a hand through his hair, considering how to balance his approach. "I need to be strategic about it," he continued, speaking aloud. "Swinging at some balls can break the pattern, but I have to be smart about when I do it. Not at crucial times, though—only when it's calculated."

Shinjiro picked up a notepad and began jotting down his thoughts. "Incorporate occasional swings at balls to disrupt opponents' expectations. Use it sparingly and at opportune moments to avoid giving away too much."

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Shinjiro picked up his notebook and began jotting down his observations and strategies. "I need to start swinging at other pitches too," he said, his pen moving swiftly across the paper. "Off-speed pitches move too much, i can't make perfect contact, but it will make me more unpredictable and improve my overall game."

He reviewed the game footage on his laptop, pausing to analyze each at-bat. "There's no doubt," he continued, "if I only react to fastballs, I'll become a one-dimensional hitter. I need to adapt, refine my approach."

He would focus on recognizing and adjusting to different pitches, working on his swing mechanics to handle off-speed and breaking balls more effectively. The goal was clear: to diversify his hitting skills and become a more versatile player.

His focus was not only on his batting but also on his performance in left field. He had made a few mistakes that needed addressing.

As he rewound the game footage to the moments he was out in the field, Shinjiro analyzed each play with a critical eye.

In one instance, he had misjudged a fly ball that seemed routine but ended up dropping just out of his reach. He cursed under his breath as he watched the replay. "Tsk i should have read that better," he said to himself. "I need to anticipate the ball's trajectory more accurately."

He saw another moment where he had hesitated on a throw to the infield, leading to an extra base for the opposing team. Shinjiro sighed. "Hmm be more decisive. Hesitation costs us valuable time and potential outs."

Shinjiro paused the video and made notes in his journal. "Focus on improving tracking skills for fly balls. Work on quick, accurate throws and avoid hesitation."

He continued to review his mistakes, noting patterns in his errors. Each mistake was a learning opportunity. Shinjiro made a plan to address these issues during practice: improving his fielding stance, reading the ball off the bat, and refining his throwing technique.

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Shota Iwata leaned against the side of the batting cage, feeling the cool metal against his back while the scent of fresh-cut grass mingled with the sharp, tangy smell of sweat in the air. The rhythmic clang of metal bats striking balls and the subsequent echoing thuds filled the cage, creating a cacophony that mirrored the turmoil within him. "Man... I can't believe Shinjiro's basically taken my spot," he muttered, his voice barely rising above the noise, laced with frustration.

He rubbed his face, feeling the grit of the afternoon heat and a sheen of sweat coating his brow. Each ball racing towards him was a reminder of his dwindling chances, blurring in his peripheral vision. It felt like the world was moving on without him, the excitement of the game slipping through his fingers like sand.

Shunichi Watanabe, leaning casually on the fence nearby, tossed a baseball up and caught it effortlessly, a stark contrast to Shota's growing impatience. His casualness stung, despite their friendship. "Shinjiro's got skill, no doubt," he said, shrugging, his voice dripping with nonchalance. "The kid's a natural."

The mention of Shinjiro ignited a fire in Shota, his grip tightening around the bat, the smooth wood feeling foreign in his increasingly clammy hand. "Yeah, and it's pissing me off," he shot back, frustration bubbling beneath his facade of composure. "All this work, and suddenly I'm just... benched for some first-year?"

Shunichi stepped closer, sensing the depth of Shota's emotion. "Relax, man. He's a first-year. You know how it goes. He's flashy now, sure, but it won't last forever. First-years always mess up at some point."

The ball whizzed towards Shota again, and he swung hard, the impact sending a jolt through his arms as the ball ricocheted off the cage. "You really think so?" he asked, glancing at Shunichi, his heart pounding beneath the weight of self-doubt and the fear of being irrelevant. It felt as though the entire world was judging him in that moment, his achievements slowly fading into the background as Shinjiro shined.

"Of course," Shunichi replied, tossing the baseball back into the machine, his tone light but reassuring. "Look, Nakamura-sensei's just giving the kid a shot. But trust me, he'll hit a rough patch. Every first-year does. And when that happens, they're gonna need someone solid—someone who's been around."

Shota took a deep breath, looking down at his bat, the wood now feeling heavier with the burden of expectation. "Guess you're right. He's good, but he's still new to all this."

"Exactly," Shunichi said, clapping Shota on the back, grounding him with a burst of warmth. "Just hang in there. Your chance will come. When it does, you've gotta be ready."

Shota felt the weight of the bat in his hands, a paradoxical comfort in its familiarity and menace. Each swing was a release, but each missed hit felt like another nail in the coffin of his former glory. He resented Shinjiro not just for stealing his spotlight, but for reminding him of everything he feared losing—his position in the team, his identity as a player, and the admiration he had once earned. The pressure mounted, tightening in his chest like a vice, every breath a reminder of the stakes.

"Man, I swear, I put in all this effort, and just like that, I'm watching from the bench like some washed-up player!" Shota clenched his fists, his voice rising in raw frustration.

"I get it, I really do," Shunichi replied, his brow furrowing in concern. "But why do you think it feels that way? Because the truth is, everyone on the team sees the talent you have. No one is forgetting about you just because Shinjiro has a hot streak!"

Shota turned to face him fully, his eyes almost pleading. "It's hard to watch him take my spot. What if he never trips up? What if Nakamura-sensei just sees him as the next big thing?"

Shunichi met Shota's gaze, grounding the moment in unwavering sincerity. "It's a long season, Shota. You're not done. And when those first-year jitters hit Shinjiro, you'll be ready to snatch back your moment in the light. I know it. You just have to hold on to that fire inside you."

Shota hesitated, the uncertainty in his heart battling the fleeting spark of belief. "You really think so?"

"I wouldn't say it if I didn't believe it! We've all seen you play and you know, deep down, you're a fielder who's never given up. Remember your first home run? How you felt standing in the batter's box?" Shunichi leaned in, his voice low and reassuring. "You've got this, man. Just breathe, and keep your focus. Your time will come."

In that moment, shrouded by the sounds of the cage, Shota found a flicker of hope amid the noise, a notion that this was not the end, but merely a chapter waiting to unfold more dramatically.