Hi everyone! Thank you for being patient with me as I get used to writing. I adjusted a bit throughout the chapters, and if you notice anything that seems different, then it might be due to my changes that early readers missed. I have fixed up the previous chapters and added more detail, and in chapter 5, I referenced a map hanging in Rita's father's library. I would like to provide an estimation for that map, and it is attached below. I made it myself, so it isn't perfect. However, it should give you an idea of the general layout and the relatively lacking world understanding everyone has, even the minor nobles like Rita's family. It also had the added bonus of giving me something productive to do while not studying for my exams.

Warning! This map is based on the one in Rita's home and the information up to this point. It may or may not be completely accurate as the story progresses, and the characters learn more about their world first hand.

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The dots are the dungeons with the colors corresponding to the dungeon ranks. There are more dungeons in the world than shown here (a couple thousand or so). White is rank one, grey is rank two, pale pink is rank three, darker pink is rank four, red is rank five, and black is rank six. The age and severity increases as the rank does. I plan to post a map of the dungeon in a few chapters, so there is that to look forward to as well.

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I am attaching a poll below for you guys to tell me what you think of it and whether or not I should continue procrastinating and fix it up some more. I am perfectly happy to do so if needed. Also, the name Graveholm is being work-shopped, and the place itself will not be directly referred to in the book itself. I just like giving everything a name for my records. I am taking recommendations as this was the best I could come up with. Post them in the comments if you have any good stronghold names.