Lets get this question out of the way. Will I be continuing this story?
The short answer is no. The long answer is yes. This story needs alot of work, and I feel I need more experience to write it well, and how I want to. At some point I hope to be able to rewrite this better. But I know that I am no where near being able to.
On to happier the things! The new story, Katra.
Synopsis:
Kardin lived a happy and good life. That is, till he was given a strange orb by an even stranger man, maybe even a demon. He watches as his village is burned, the villagers slaughtered and his friend devoured. He escapes into the Jungle of The Gods, a place of ancient ruins and deadly animals.
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There, he is changed and his fate diverges from what should have been his death.
Now he must forge his own path in a world of great beauty and power, where death lurks around the corner and battles between veritable gods are fought. Where nations clash and ancient beings destory civilizations on whims.
I am trying my hand at world building mainly in this story. It is a mix between Wuxia, Xainxia and western fantasy. Of course, it does not have the many tropes of xainxia. And you may just recognize some things...