A creative writing that derived from a short poem, so this is just a short story based somewhat on a poem. Follow David and Lucy on a journey to discover the source of the strange rumors within the ruin of the ancient kingdom Nettle.___First FictionIt's a short story with the intention to test the waterLike seeing if the stone will float when thrown into the lakePlease state everything that you see and suggest any improvements,___________________________________Story is told by stage like scenarios...Don't read the poem until you finished the short story it kind of gives it away.http://www.fantasypoetrybyjongutmacher.com/the-creature/The Creature: copyright 2011 by jon gutmacher