Well, I hate to say this, since this is my first work, but I messed up. This version of the story is too convoluted and, well, not good.

I am starting over. so this is the last chapter in this version of the story.

I'm not deleting any of the chapters, as this is a good example of my growth. Folks can see this and then when they move on to my adjusted work will see the difference right away, and be confident that I care about what I write and will hopefully stick with me.

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The Revamped story line will be called:

The Chronicles of Mira: The God Breaker Saga.

Keep an eye out for it as I am still editing the new story to be much easier to follow.