Hello, Travelers!
First off, I want to thank each and every one of you for reading The Broken NPC—your support, comments, and theories make this journey all the more exciting! I’ve received some fantastic feedback from the community, and one particular point stood out: the introduction of certain characters felt a bit too abrupt. And you know what? I completely agree.
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After reading through your thoughts, I realized that I established these relationships a little too quickly, and I want to do justice to the characters, their dynamics, and the world we’re building together. So, I’ll be making some revisions and edits to introduce these characters more naturally, giving them the space they deserve to grow into the story.
These updates will go live as soon as I’m finished polishing them—so stay tuned! Thank you again for your patience, your sharp eyes, and for being part of this adventure. Your feedback helps make The Broken NPC even better, and I’m beyond grateful to have such an awesome community along for the ride.
More soon!
— Loomwright