Hey guys! I want to know what you guys want to read about. 

For instance, do you want to know more about the cities, countries, Ema?, the entity's views as he changes his world, more in depth outside world building? etc...

I know it's a bit early to ask about that and to be honest I plan on writing about all of it. I'm just wondering what people would like to read first!

Also I want to know if anyone has any tips to improve my storytelling as this is my first attempt for something like this. 

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I made some edits to previous chapters and I added more dialogue to chapter 2 and changed some other things. Nothing major but I think my changes made all the chapters slightly more fluid.

Lastly! I will monitor this post every now and then going forward, so if you want to comment about something on an old chapter somewhere down the line then this will be the best place for me to see it!

Thanks for reading! 

.-.I Draw.-.