I. The Great Points Robbery
Ahmed was riding high. He had just pulled off the ultimate trick, earning a ridiculous amount of points just by acting like he had accepted his fate.
Life was good.
Too good.
That's when he should have known...
The System never lets him win for long.
[SYSTEM ALERT: HOST, YOUR POINTS BALANCE IS TOO HIGH. SYSTEM WILL NOW IMPLEMENT A 'FAIRNESS ADJUSTMENT'.]
Ahmed froze mid-smirk.
"...Wait. WAIT. What 'fairness adjustment'?!"
[SYSTEM ALERT: REMOVING 50% OF HOST'S POINTS FOR 'BALANCE'.]
"NOOOOOOOO!" Ahmed screamed as if his soul was being ripped out of his body.
It was too late.
His beautiful, hard-earned points—GONE.
Just like that. Vanished into the void.
His entire body felt weak. His knees buckled. His breath shook.
"...My... my babies..." Ahmed whimpered, clutching his chest like a tragic hero in a historical drama.
Clayra and Liza just watched, utterly confused.
"My lady, did he just lose something important?" Liza asked, tilting her head.
"I believe so," Clayra replied, amused by Ahmed's visible suffering.
Meanwhile, Ahmed had collapsed onto the floor, twitching.
"System..." he whispered, his voice low and full of betrayal.
[SYSTEM ALERT: YES, HOST?]
"Give them back."
[SYSTEM ALERT: NO <3]
"I SWEAR GOD, I WILL FIND A WAY TO DELETE YOU!"
[SYSTEM ALERT: HOST CANNOT DELETE SYSTEM. HOWEVER, SYSTEM HAS A GIFT FOR YOU TO SOFTEN THE BLOW.]
"A gift?" Ahmed perked up slightly, suspicious but curious. "...What kind of gift?"
[SYSTEM ALERT: UPGRADING HOST'S CUTENESS LEVEL FROM 50% → 80%.]
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Ahmed stopped breathing.
"...Wait. What?"
[SYSTEM ALERT: COMMENCING CUTENESS ENHANCEMENT.]
"WAIT, NO—"
II. THE CURSED TRANSFORMATION
A golden light ENGULFED him.
The air sparkled.
The ground trembled.
Somewhere in the heavens, an angelic choir started singing.
And then, just as suddenly as it began, the light faded...
...revealing Ahmed 2.0: The Ultimate Adorable Edition.
The entire room went silent.
Liza's mouth parted slightly, her normally emotionless face showing pure shock.
Clayra? Visibly trembling. Holding her heart.
Ahmed felt the change before he even looked in a mirror. His hair had become softer, fluffier—like fresh cotton candy. His eyes? Larger, shinier, like a tragic anime protagonist with a sad backstory. His skin? So smooth it looked airbrushed in real life.
Even his cheeks had become rounder, with a light pink blush permanently painted on them.
"..."
Ahmed slowly turned his gaze to Clayra and Liza.
Their expressions?
Destroyed.
Liza visibly swallowed. "...My lady..."
Clayra was shaking. "Liza..."
"Yes, my lady?"
"...I'm dying."
III. THE MONSTER HE HAD BECOME
Ahmed, horrified, sprinted to a nearby mirror.
And when he saw his own reflection...
His soul left his body.
"NOOOOOOOOOO!"
[SYSTEM ALERT: CONGRATULATIONS! HOST HAS ACHIEVED PEAK CUTENESS.]
"I DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS!"
[SYSTEM ALERT: YOU'RE WELCOME <3]
"I WILL BURY YOU!"
[SYSTEM ALERT: SORRY, HOST. SYSTEM HAS ALREADY DUG ITS OWN GRAVE FROM LAUGHING TOO HARD.]
Ahmed grabbed his head, freaking out. "This is a nightmare! This is an absolute nightmare!"
But just as he was about to collapse from sheer existential horror...
...Clayra suddenly rushed forward, scooping him up in her arms like a mother lifting her long-lost baby.
"I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! YOU'RE TOO CUTE!"
Liza's stoic expression finally cracked—her lips trembled.
Even the walls seemed to tremble from the power of his cuteness.
Ahmed, still dangling in Clayra's grip, twitched violently.
"PUT ME DOWN, YOU CRAZY WOMAN!"
[SYSTEM ALERT: HOST HAS EARNED 3,000 POINTS FOR 'ACCIDENTALLY BREAKING PEOPLE'S MINDS WITH HIS CUTENESS'.]
"I REFUSE TO ACCEPT THESE POINTS!"
[SYSTEM ALERT: TOO BAD.]
Clayra was hugging him so tightly, he could barely breathe.
"Liza, Liza, what do I do? I can't stop hugging him!"
Liza, gripping the wall for support, exhaled slowly. "My lady, control yourself."
Ahmed, on the verge of insanity, screamed at the ceiling.
"SYSTEM! CHANGE ME BACK RIGHT NOW!"
[SYSTEM ALERT: SORRY, HOST. CUTENESS ENHANCEMENT IS PERMANENT.]
A long silence.
Clayra's hug got even tighter.
Liza smiled slightly.
Ahmed's eye twitched violently.
And then, at the top of his lungs, he let out the most heart-wrenching, rage-filled cry known to mankind:
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!"
Epilogue: The Ultimate Teasing BeginsAhmed is now an '80% Cute Level' disaster with no way to change back.Clayra is completely obsessed with her "cute son" and won't let him go.Liza has started to secretly enjoy watching Ahmed suffer.The System is rolling on the floor laughing in the void.
And thus, Ahmed's suffering continued.
End of Chapter 11