After finishing up some games, animes, and movies. I came back to check on my fanfic and reread it. I slowly realize something wrong about this story. It's very short per chapter.
You see after some reading, and some re-reading of this story. I think the story doesn't have the sense of death in it like the original story 'Terror Infinity'.
What'd I mean by that is that I inadequately fail to capture the beginning. Honestly, I should have wrote it with more passion and thrill.
I believe I failed the characters honestly. Focus too much on the 'npcs' of the plot. So I hope by improving this fault by having a general more focus on the main character.
This story originates from Royal Road. Ensure the author gets the support they deserve by reading it there.
This story is literally going to be re booted. As in entirely different plot. I give you a hint. It's ain't Jurassic Park that's for sure.
Of course main character going to remain the same. Similar beginning. I planned on improving it and make a more well executed beginning to get people to have interest.
Well this rewrite. It going to be a bit more better. As in the sense of Death would be remarkably high.