"What the - where am I?" He wondered looking around the poorly lit rectangular area he found himself in, "Guess I must've had a little too much to drink..." he concluded.

He stood up overwhelmed by the rotting the stench filling the air.

"Is that my body pillow?" he thought to himself before going to investigate the source of the foul stench.

After a moment of searching the dark area, he was horrified to discover the foul odor was coming from a decomposing corpse, seeing this he jumped back covering his nose as he became overwhelmed by the feeling of nausea.

The snaps back to his senses after hearing a loud bang echoing off a metal surface behind him, he spun around revealing a metal door with a large dirty window, through the dusty glass he was able to catch a glimpse of another door with an equally dirty window - that is where the noise came from.

Quickly following the noise the large metal door creaked open a cloud of dust erupted and instantly was blown away smothering the air and the window nearest to him, from the room behind the second door which was now open crawled out a creature on all fours, once it left the room a short while of silence occurred before being replaced by the sound of scratching "If your asking for rent I don't have it!" he blurted out nervously. Seemly unphased by the comment the creature stood up, it's silhouette now clearly visible in the heavily dusty window.

with what seemed like an abnormally long arm the creature opened the heavy metal door creating yet another loud screeching noise, slowly at first took one long step into the room the person was in - before it broke out into a sprint making its way towards the terrified man.

In a panic, the not-so-athletic man turned around and started to run narrowly dodging the monster's claws - which is used to slash at him tearing apart the seats around them filling the air with splintered wood and bits of torn fabric.

The man rushed towards the door opposite the monster, as soon as he made it he began to tug on the handle realizing that it was locked. With no other way out he turned back to see the monster, took a deep breath and leaped through the glass window causing it to shatter allowing him to fly through the small window hole and narrowly dodging

the monstrous swiping its claws at him, determined not to let him escape.

After landing on the cold metal platform outside he shut his eyes expecting the monster to follow before opening them a few seconds later to see why his demise has been averted - much to his surprise the monster was unable to fit through the door, "Ah fatty" he remarked seeing the monster trying to use long limbs scratch and claw at him.

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After taking a few seconds to regain his composure, the man looked around seeing that he was in fact on a platform between to train carts, the train wasn't going on any tracks it was as if it was suspended in a black abyss, worried that he would fall off he hurried inside hoping that the monster wouldn't figure out how to open the door.

When he stepped into the room he was surprised to see two people, a young girl pale face and covered with blood seemingly unconscious sitting on one of the seats and an old man standing a short distance away looking at her. Two people with the man's background this girl would have been described as a loli, and the old man staring at said loli would be Jarred the subway guy.

"Woah man don't get your mayonnaise over her" the old man turned towards me seemingly offended by the comment, without saying anything he went back to looking at the child only to realize she was awake "Oh hey girl I just met, you're awake!"

The blood-covered loli is somewhat dishearted by the fact she is covered in blood in a poorly lit room with strange men, one of which may or may not be Jarred the subway guy. "where am I, who are you, where are my parents?" she screamed.

The old man laughed "Don't worry, you're okay". The man looked at the little girl "Don't worry you'll be safe if I'm around" a third voice from behind them said, "yeah let's DO IT!".

The old man and I turned to look at what was behind us, it was one of my people "Why are you guys looking at me" the man said in a nervous voice. "What do you mean why" the old man nearly had a heart attack" they all turn toward the door the man laughs "Is it just me or did that monster open the door".

The monster ran into the room with the four people, it began to screech like it was in pain. The man, old person and loli began to sprint into the next room while the last man began to walk like he didn't have a care in the world.

"hey, why are you so calm!" the man shouted at him, the last man laughed "oh that's because I don't even fucking exist, honestly you people think you can escape!" his face turned into one of a monster. "oh that's just great we have two monsters to deal with!" the man cried.

the old man looked at the little girl "run faster!" he shouted the little girl began to cry "I can't, I just can't!" the old man ripped his shirt off revealing his massive muscles "Don't worry I'll carry you" the girl ran for her life "no thanks, I'm fine".

The man began to smile "you sure little girl" the man said this because he would finally be in contact with a girl, he also began to rip his shirt off he turned back to see that the monster ripped his skin off.

"Whoah there cowboy." The monster looked tired and it collapsed on the ground possibly because of the amount of blood he lost.

The moral of this story is that sometimes we need an old man chasing us to get that push to get things done!