So welcome to my first actual chapter that I totes didn't accidentally delete but if you have any advice and/or any tips on how to add to and fix up my story go ahead because I will take all constructive criticism to heart so I must say hello and thank you in advance.
After waking up from what ever just happened after my death I saw a "creature" with an aura that gave a feeling of absolute power and one that demanded absolute respect from all living beings.And what I saw next sent me into a state of awe it was the area around me.The "sky" was purple and the ground was a blazing red pulsating heat and making me sweat just by looking at it. "Welcome to my newly created realm mortal" He said,"Why am I here" I quickly responded,soon he said "Well the reason why you are here is to test what a creature like you could do given a new life" he said."Well I'm very thankful for this but I must as one thing from you,why me why not all the others who died in my world?" I said."Well to be honest I'm very bored to a point where I don't even want to use my power of omnipotence so to quench my thirst for excitement I'm letting you reincarnate into a planet" He said,"but then why are you so lax right now shouldn't you use your omnipotence to see if I pose a threat to you?" I responded,"well I know I'm lax but what about you shouldn't you be more concerned about your possibly dead friends?" he said, after that I noticed that I was slowly dissipating but when I noticed that I was fading away the creature said "Before you go I will tell you that due to the fact that our conversation got cut short that by saying 'Status' you can see you power and many other things".After I heard those words I fell into a deep sleep like state only to be rudely awoken by a burning sensation,after this I saw my "body" it was a small ball of dirt roughly the size of a child's balled fist.Remembering His words I promptly said "status"
Name: ?Titles: N/APower:1Power Generated 1P/Min
"Hey wait this system seems like a game,and most games have help systems so I guess I'm going to say Help" and of course as any totally not crazy person would I said Help and some how it worked
Increase Mass: 10PCreate Core: 100PCreate Life: 1000 to 1Mil PowerIncrease Size: 1000 to 1Mil PowerIncrease Birth Rate: 2Mil Power For 10% Birth Rate
After seeing this screen the most interesting thing was the core and as a former human curiosity over took me and I had the amazing idea of waiting for 100 min yea I'm not being sarcastic at all no,I would never!But besides the strange thoughts that I had in my planet version I waited then obtained the core only to feel a tingling sensation in my body and to see that my previously small body increased in size by five times,and that also that a calming light blue mist was erupting from my body.As a normal avid gamer would think I thought that the blue mist was mana,but as most are in life and other ordeals I was wrong the blue mist that I saw was actually the essence of my core and gave living beings the ability to use mana,and wow when I say this caused problems believe me this caused some serious problems,or it didn't ,eh you won't know until it happens or doesn't.As some would think ayyy why are you just talking to your self and of course if I heard this I would respond with the words because I can and I do what a want to cuz I'm a tiny ball of dirt.Just as think/talking to myself a speck of dirt landed on me and quickly became green slowly turning into a jade like crystal then promptly attached onto my body sending a wave of what I can only describe as velvet red across me
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Congratulation you have been the first to discover the Crystal Of Creation,by being the first to discover the Crystal you have gained an achievement due to finding the Crystal and you luck for encountering it in the first place.
Title gained: Stupidly Lucky Unlocked Stats and permanent plus 10 to luck, but also minus 10 in wisdom
Crystal Of Creation: A Permanent +5 Power/Min Every Level,-1% To The Time Between Getting Power Per Lvl And The Lvl System Has Been Unlocked
Well then that's not broken at all well then I guess it's time to wait for power yay what a joy.
Minor Time Skip
Well after waiting for hours on end somehow without being incredibly bored to the point of wanting to just randomly use my power I finally obtained 11 Million power but now comes the question WHY DID I WAIT FOR THIS.Well after that rage filled session I purchased a 1 Mil size increase only to become a 10m by 10m circle of course I just had to use all 11 Mil power to see what it would do so I did and in the end my size increased to the rough size of earth.so now that I have a good chunk of mass I guess it's time for more waiting ugggh.
After gaining 11 Mil again I remembered that I never checked the stats screen so I promptly did and received this
Name: ?Titles: Stupidly LuckyStr: 100Power: 11 MillionInt: 100Power Generated: 11P/MinLuk: 10Wis: 90
Author Note:So thx for reading this first chapter of The Scale Model Of Creation I hope you enjoyed and I hope you post any criticism if you have any so again thx for reading