So I know I might regret this, but I am currently going back through, making notes of any promises I implied in the story and editing along the way.

That being said, I am opening up this space for people to make suggestions and comments on how I can improve continuty, characterization, spelling, grammer, and anything else that people think can be improved.

Stolen story; please report.

One thing I seem to get marked down on for reviews is either story or characterization.

If I am not getting things across as well as I should be, then I will take happily take suggestions.

Also, I will to renow my ever present plea for ratings and reviews. Trust me, I live for these things.

You guys are awesome,

Foxmoor