I gave up on the (-Name here) its easy to keep track.
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"It's a BOY" were the first words that i could finally hear. After walking in that water for almost like an eternity. Finally i could feel the faint light of the sun.
I couldn't yet open my eyes so i used my entire power to open them. As i finally managed to open my eyes i was bombarded by the huge amount of colors. As i was looking around i saw 2 people. A man and a woman, my new family.
"See dear everything was alright. Look our baby is healthy." said my mom. She was woman with a certain charm, with a stunning white hair and green like eyes that made me forget about anything, making me unable to look somewhere else. In my world no woman was like this. Maybe in this world this is considered pretty normal.
"Heh not even a few minutes in the world and he already recognizes his parents. Thank the heavens we were blessed with a healthy boy." said a man that had a hair black as the night with a small dark mustache. His muscles could be seen under his clothes.
As i was checking their traits i tried to move my body but sleep took hold my body......This time i will not let myself trampled by others. I will use all of my knowledge to make my name known trough the land. NOBODY WILL DARE TO FIGHT ME OR MY FAMILY.
*Father's POV*
"Ahh finally we have a son! Almira finally our love brought us a child" said the man with a huge smile on his face while playing with his son's little hands.
"Yes Bernt, he is the result of our love so we must be careful and raise him to have a kind hearth and honest nature. As we talked before , his name will be Leto."
"Indeed. I hope that he will rise as a great man. My brothers children are already one year old and are fed with rare plants just to have a better foundation. Sigh* our child will face hardships. I hope that at least his childhood will be filled with happiness and good fortune." while i said the words i approached my wife and gave her a kiss on her forehead.
*End POv*
"Yawwwwn~ ..... "It has been a week already and i made a simple report about this world. Apparently i'm the son of a so called cultivator and a strong one, as i heard from their discussions. Our family is part of the Sky Mountain. Why the funny name?, well apparently the clan is placed between mountains. These mountains surrounded the clan from 3 sides, so it was a strong strategically spot.
But the worst thing was that i had to endure the feeding procedures. Well why should i endure the feeding?, well i wasn't fed with normal milk, they kept saying that it was a beast milk and it was good for the bone and muscle development. My mother Almira complained to my father which was pretty funny from my perspective.
As they argued they heard my laugh and looked at me. After a short while they looked in each others eye both revealing a slight smile and compromised mixing her milk with the beast making it easier to absorb?......
After a year i was finally able to stay in my room. It was a safe haven. My room was painted in a shade light blue like the sky. A drawer, a simple bed and a shelf stacked with books. As curiosity made the best of me, i started to read all of them.
After reading a book about the history of this world i was completely stunned. This world was so behind with the technology that it made me cringe. They had cultivators and other stuff but still, they only use their cultivation to make their life easier. ARGHHHHHH. I can't believe how this world stagnated in this way. Urgh i feel a headache already. So i was sent here to make a revolution?......
While i was walking around and looking trough book i finally finded the book i was looking for *Basics of Cultivation*. After reading it i simply facepalmed myself . This so called cultivation was all about sucking energy and depositing inside one's body making the body better, harder and stronger, and making the individual able to control that energy to deploy different skills, that were separated in 3 categories, offence defense and support.
Trough the pile of books i found some scrolls that were tied with a thread. As i untied and started to read it i suddenly started to cry. This scroll talked about making new skills or "techniques" that it required one to have the a strong mental capacity, but in the end it resumed to imagination and how bog was your mana pool.
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As the young so called leto read , cried and facepalmed, another person was watching his actions. This person was a maid that had the duty to protect the young master. His weird behavior made her chuckle and started to use one of her techniques to whisper the madam about the young master.
The mother was slightly worried about her son behaviour but it was expected for a one year child to be like this so she didn't look into this matter.
As the days passed on Leto was dragged by his father to train. For now the training was to draw energy of the world inside himself, making his body stronger and stronger.
"My son the method that i'm gonna teach you is called Earthly Link. Trough this technique you can gather the energy of world trough the earth. Imagine your body growing roots in the earth then start dra........" but he couldn't finish his words as leto started to emit a green aura, thanks to the technique.
His father was flabergasted as his son on his first try was able to use the technique. The so called high tier technique that made the clan what was today. But one thing was odd his son's aura was increasing at a quick speed . reaching bronze rank 8. One shoul know that the start of all cultivators was at bronze rank 10. But as he gathered the holy energy he quickly broke trough two ranks . This happened before but the people who did this were marked to be great geniuses.
Sigh, what my father taught me was the so called best heavenly suction technique but it was too vague , so i started to change the roots with circuits making them better for energy suction that made the absortion but as i gathered more energy i could feel that something inside me was changing like breaking a dam, only to be met with a bigger one. As i charged my source i could feel a second dam breaking making my body shudder and stop. As i opened my eyes i could see that my father was shocked, so i took the initiative.....
"Father what's wrong?"
"Leto what have you done. How could you gather so much earthly energy? I know very well the extension of the technique but what you did was heaven defying !"
Tsk.... so it wasn't good i could draw unwanted attention.... fine let's play stupid. "W-What do you mean father i i was just doing what you told me...."
"Was i wrong...... nevermind maybe you have a good affinity with the earth element. Continue your training but take it step by step otherwise your body will suffer in the future...." said my father as he started to walk outside the training room.
As he finally walked away i could look around the room in a relaxed manner. As i looked around i could see many wooden weapons that were hanged to the wall. Checking again if somebody was here i quickly went and took a spear. As i looked and tested the spear i could somewhat use it. Looking around i found a dummy . As i approached i started to use the skill i learnt back in my world, hit by hit the poor dummy started to spin to left or right , depending of my mighty swings.
After an hour my body was too tired to train, so i silently put the spear in the rack and quickly ran in my room to take my well earned rest.
But he didn't notice again the maid that was completely stunned. She saw everything, since the cultivation technique accident till the spear style the young master did. As she returned to her normal state of mind she quickly left the room and went to her mistress telling her everything.
"Ho so my son is a prodigy. Wow i'm so happy maybe he will help his father rise in ranks, i cant wait to see his future..." said his mom with a big smile on her face.
But as always good things don't come alone. As soon the maid left the area a shadow quickly left the hallway. The shadow ran till he made it to the other part of the sect where a stunning woman with a black hair and blue eyes was staring at the moon.
As the shadow arrived he bent on one knee and told her everything he heard,making the woman flinch for a second.
"so my sister in law has a prodigy, ..... hmmmm, still he will not be able to compete with my son Daine..... continue watching that child's every move, and report them to me."
"Yes master" the shadow bowed once more and dissapeared in the night.
My son will become the heir not that wench's child. Said the woman in her head while putting up plans to help her child attain the heir title.......
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