hi i am doing this to answer some comments about the novel and the grammer and such.

1 why is your grammer so bad, or in one case do you even grammer bro.

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my brain goes very fast and i have a laptop so trying to type at the speed my brain is going on a small keyboard is hard, not only that but if i re-read the chapter i wrote before posting i change stuff and get confused so i end up not writting.

2. the way my writting is

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i haven't written a story before so my writting style isn't very good on top of that i am a real life loaner and got bullyed and such when i was younger meaning no friends so my vocabuary is weird or almost none exsistant, ontop of that i normally run on instinct so i dont think before writting or what i am doing, one of the down side of the form of aspergus i got.

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3. will you fix the grammer or story?

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yes i will but once the first arc is done as then i can force myself to get help from my family to fix the grammer or flow of the story and also to help me understand better.

if you got any questions you want to ask about the story or about the way my writting is or such just ask i am not bothered and will answer as best i can heck you can ask more than one question at a time if you want. and yes i am aiming to write the first arc then read through it and re-write it so the flow is better and understandable and also fix the grammer, if i do it now i will aim to change the arc or something and that will end up with me dropping this and i really dont want to do that.

oh yeah i am going to try to change my writting style the next chapter i even thought of a way to explain the change in the novel so look foward to that, and i mostly write late at night so yeah.