Hey everyone, I know that I've been gone so long and just all of a sudden popped out but I will clarify something. I am still had too many issues regarding my current living, so expect an unexpected updates. Yes, I still had grammar issues and other errors in writing, but I still try to improve my writing.
Okay, lets get on to the real topic for this update. I had troubles regarding the character's interactions and speeches. SO I decided to make some bit changes.
• "Deadpan" speech pattern
"... Hello..." «Person A»
• Thinking/Telepathic
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"What is the author thinking?" «Person B»
"Don't know... but I hope it worth it..." «Person C»
• Communication device / Recorder / Speaker
{ARCHER, This is OVERWATCH. TANGO detected 5 Click from your 6.}
• Computer Text / Etc.
[Beware of Stray Bullet]
Hoped that you like some changes. :grin:
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