So I started this wrong and have been stumbling along since then to get to a place I want to be comfortable finishing it. But, every day is just another day I don't want to work on this, and when it is my only project I can power on by spite. But, when It stops being my only project and I have something more engaging, It quickly becomes just a chore I want rid of. Later I might write it a lot better, but this chapter of my writing carrer is just going to be filed away under learning experience and left alone forever.
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