Hi!! Ok this is embarassing but please dont rage. Oh and DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT AND POSSIBLE SPOILERS!!!

During this summer I worked for a very labour intensive company, this gave me a lot of stress and i needed a release. One day during morning break I stared day dreaming about a sith apprentice suddenly appearing in a fantasy world and how his ability with the force and the magic of the world interacted. For the rest of the day that was all i could think about and I even had a debate with a friend about it. 

Anyway after a few days of thoughts the story pretty much developed to where it is now. During my lunch break while reading a new chapter on here I decided to write it down. and so i did and uploaded it. Now i didnt plan any of the story, just what came to mind. 

Anyway I want to carry on writing it and develop at least a basic plan for the first arc. Now this is where my problem is, I came up with 5 differnt story lines in detail and ended up, finding massive holes in the story, not exciting enough or ended up hating the storyline.

Please could you help me come up with some ideas for the first arc and also what you would like to see. I do have a few things I want in there though.

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1. Elf Princess is not a harem member 

2. First girl not from earth or the star wars univers is a lumia (sorry i have a thing for them :P) and he meets her before knowing about the girl he saved from earth and his master.

3. MC is distant and dislikes speaking to strangers. He also has nightmares occationally, remembering the pain of bring tortured to death.

4. Need an antagonist

5. He discovers a force sesative person who is a native of this world. (Preferably not human, dont mind if male or female, age can be 8/9/10 - 17/18, if female age 16 and above possible harem member.) and takes them as a student. They travel with/live with him. Their family is either very small, one or two members (not the parents) or they dont have any family members. The other option is that they are a slave.

6. Kara does have romantic feelings for Ullr but dosent realise it a first, but after some sort of incident involving them she realises and accepts them. But as Kara tries to make advances, Ullr due to their past, thinks she is just trying to trick him so she can try to brainwash him again and control him.

7. Ullr is strong but not OP at all, but his Light Swords is a very OP weapon, but to make a more interesting begining, I want something to happen that causes the kiber crystels to shatter, rendering them useless. Eventually though, soon after he meets and takes along his new student, they discover an abandoned and empty cave, inside the cave is a huge amount of crystels that with a small modifiction can replace the kiber crystals.

8. Ullr's personality is a Dark Hero type. He will help, if he thinks they deserve it. Wont hesitate when making a difficult choice. Due to being imprisoned Ullr can't stand cages, chains and being locked in somewhere.

9. Ullr is very inteligent and has amzing instincts. He is a very powerful force user about master level power but his knowlage of the force is lacking. As Yoda says "Much to learn you still have."

Ok please help me with this and tell me if there is anything that needs improving!

Thanks guys and gals

Peace