About RE: Cooking Knife.
First of all thank you for reading everyone! Especially those what posted comments.
This is the end of my 3 day write a weird story project!
I remembered a slogan I saw in a comment not long ago.
I am a reader not a writer!
That explains the quality a bit…. I could have not rushed it as much as I did but then again I did do it hahaha....
About the story:
There would be a couple of ways to increase the length of the story, one being too delay the meeting with the Hero this being that when our mc joins the hero it’s hard to keep our mc as main since Elise will use him all the time and he has to follow her.(could have make it possible that knife can generate a humanoid body but that would be a bit too much for Elise to gather the things needed for that)
This includes our mc being switched from owners a couple of times woodworkers bandits etc. before meeting the hero, but I couldn’t make that really interesting.
I tried to make things a bit logical with the resonance how he use mp since he is a blade and has no mana channeling network or something. The way he feels he is melting in chapter 1 normal bodies don’t melt therefor the acid.
The mc does gets beaten up a lot, something personal of me? Well I don’t expect that a knife likes being made and used for crude work…
This text was taken from Royal Road. Help the author by reading the original version there.
Who knew it was a she? I didn’t….. lol, some people were shocked!! Or not… xD
Other plot twists:
Takes over the users mind.
Mc being a sword instead of knife.
Some sort of extending skill.
Fusing with a firestone (firemagic good for cooking)
Many many other things.
People that translated the code in chapter one, you got my respect!
My blue boxes aren’t top quality I’m sorry for that!
Well that kind of was it don’t know if I will write such stories in the future or any at all.
If you are going to write a similar story with lvling an item tell me! I would love to read it.
Again thanks for reading!
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If you find any related FF with sword hammer knife shield etc comment!
Re: sword popped up 26/1/2015!!!!!! (yay) http://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/1232
It has a better writer and the story is also enjoyable so far. seriously recommended!