AN: this chapter is out late so sorry about that. :boworpushups: the power where im at keeps going out and i dont even have internet at home right now [th_015_orz-v2.gif] so i had to rewrite this chapter from the start. its shorter then the first write but hey things happen.
Luckly i didnt have do it a third time. three seconds after i emailed it to my self the power at work went out [th_001_-v2.gif] but with out any more rants here is the chapter tellme what you think and point out any errors plz...............................
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“-Yal.I really don’t like you.”
After looking around I see that in a cave somewhere. Right when I went to take a step a deafen roar rocked the cave. Turing toward the source I see a three meter tall bear with two heads. The left head has foam coming out of its mouth, while the right head has electric running across its teeth. Before I could do anything the bear charges at me. Jump to the left three feet I get out of his way.
“You think you can hurt eat me you lower world mutt.”
The two heads look at each other with confusing on their faces. After a few second trying to figure out if its lunch was talking to it the bear used its left paw to swat him away like he was a fly. The hit sent him flying across the cave.
“You mother-“
Not getting to finish his statement Mack had to start dodging the bear’s paws. First the left paw came down over head. Jump back he was able to dodge the strike. Next came a strong right paw aiming for his head. Mack drops to the floor and rolls right. Standing back up he gives the bear a death stare. He could believe a lower world beast was given him trouble. Not want to admit that he was having trouble with bear he went on the offense. He throw a right hook that sent the bear crashing into a cave wall. Standing up the bear was furious that its lunch was able to hurt him. Letting out another roar he charged at Mack. Mack thinking he was stronger charged back ready for a head on crash with the bear. Upon impact Mack was sent flying back into the cave wall. The impact buried him seven feet deep. He could feel that one of his arms were broken along with a couple of ribs.
“Little one, I know you are hurt but you have to get back up and run. You cannot win this battle.”
“You know you can help me out instead of just talking in my head.”
“Pffff, Why not you little shit.”
“NO! Chaos don’t.”
A blinding black light started to form around Mackenzy. The bear sensing something off starts to charge at Mackenzy with all its might. In the middle of it’s charging both mouths start to open. In the left mouth you can see a green and purple mist start to build, while in the right I flashing blue light is pulsing. When the bear is five feet from Mackenzy he lets loose his attacks. Thundering lighten and a stream a vile poison come from the bear and converge on Mackenzy’s location. A loud boom resound in the cave with a large dust cloud. As the smoke clears all that’s left of the areas is a crater with rocks that were turned to dust. The bear realizing that its prey got away lets out a roar so loud the whole cave shook.
After the blinding black light dispersed I found myself inside a lush green forest. All the trees around me were thirty meters tall with trunks five to ten meters thick. After realizing the bear wasn’t attacking me anymore I started to franticly search for it. Knowing that I was off the lunch menu all the strength in my legs gave out, and I plopped on to the grass. Dam that bear hit hard.
“Hey Order why do I feel so weak?”
“That’s because you are weak you little shit. Getting your ass handled to you by a rank five magic beast.”
“I don’t remember asking you Chaos.”
“You little-”
“SO Order how was it possible that a level five magic beast was able to hurt me. Not much can hurt a limbodan, especially not some level five magic bear.”
“Well little one, there are two reasons why you are so weak. One is you don’t have a stats card yet so about one half of your stats are looked until you get it. And two is because you never completed the coming of age so you have no powers.”
“But how is that possible I remember starting the ceremony, why didn’t I complete it?”
“I’m sorry little one; I can’t answer that for you because I don’t know. And before you ask, no we can’t do the ceremony for you only your people knew how.”
“So what now. You said you need me to get strong, how can I get strong without access to my powers?”
“O just shut up already all you got to do is unlock them the original way. Dam you such a bitch, ha-ha.”
“I really, really, want to punch you in the face.”
“Chaos please shut up, you have messed up enough already, and we are running out of time.”
“What do you mean Order.”
“As you know little one, There are some rules beings like us have to follow, and with all stuff that Chaos have done have we can’t really intervene anymore, The plan was to have you awake your powers in the upper realms the old way but Chaos got in the way. So now you have to find the way yourself. Sorry.”
“I take back what I said Chaos, I want to kill you.”
“Why thank you, I try.”
“…”
“…”
“So, how am I to get my powers you do know that my people haven’t done it that way in about one million years, and I don’t know how?”
“Sorry little one, all I can say is that it’s in your blood and to follow your instincts. You will get there. This is the last time we will talk for a while, bye little one.”
“Wait, can you at least tell me how to get out of here and which way to a city.”
“….”
“Hello, hello, is any one there?”
"....."
“Great, Dam entities, they always leaving shit out. So how the hell am I going to get out get out of here?”
After three hours of walking I found myself at a large lake. The water was crystal blue with fish swimming and jumping out of the water. After seeing how dirty I looked with my tattered clothes I decided to take a swim. Right when I was about to jump into the water on the other side of the lake a young girl about eighteen walked out of the woods stark necked. We both stood there looking at each other for a good ten seconds before she ran off back the way she came. After taking off after her I realized I forgot my clothes and I was running through the wood in the nude. After getting smacked in the lower region by tree branches I don’t know how many times, I got to say this was not my brightest idea. Dam rock got in my way and made me lose sight of the girl. Looking around to see if I could find her trail again I notice that I don’t even know which was I came from.
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“Great; Mack what now? Your nude, cut up, and lost. Great job you big dummy.”
After letting my anger out on a new by tree picked a random direction and started to walk. Two minutes later I saw a large white blob that looked like a mass of cotton. Still being mad about being lost I ran up to it and punted the thing like a football.
“Ouch, that was harder than I expected.”
Ding
You have killed a young two horn rabbit in an unconventional way
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“Opps sorry little guy. Didn’t mean for that to happen, o well.”
The moment I go to walk of a blur rushed across my face. Looking at where it lands I see a white rabbit with two horn coming out of its head. It has bulging muscles and stands two meters tall and three meters long.
“What the hell are you supposed to be? Since when does rabbit get as big as bears?”
While I was standing there trying to figure out if that thing is even a rabbit, I start to flames in its eyes. I think he is mad at me for punting his little friend. I cannot see this turning out well. 0
The rabbit-bear lowered his head, flexed his hind legs and charged at me. Jumping out of the way just in time the rabbit took out the next three trees behind me.
“Yea, I’m not getting hit by that.”
The rabbit came back at me swinging his left paw at my head. Ducking under the swipe I just back three feet to dodge the left paw coming in. Me and the rabbit danced like this for the next two minutes. Good thing I was faster than the rabbit because every time his paws hit a tree or rock it shattered.
“Come on I know you can do better than this right.” After taunting him he lets a howl and starts to glow yellow. “You just had to ask didn’t you Mack.”
The rabbit once again let out a full charge at me only this time his speed was double what it was before. After a few charges I was able to get my timing down. Taunting the rabbit into another charge I side stepped at the last minute and let out a quick jab. Upon on contact I felt one of his ribs break, and I sent him flying through at least two trees.
“Come on, I’m not done with you yet. I got to pay you back for what the bear did to me.”
The rabbit stand up wobbly, looks at me with grinning teeth and starts to glow red. ”Really the same trick. Is that all you got?”
The rabbit charged with all its might at me thinking that with is double speed it had a chance. I side step, put my right arm above his head with my left below his neck and twist in a semi-circle motion. The downward force along with his momentum sent the rabbit flying through the air with a lost expression on his face. You could see that he didn’t know how he ended up in the air upside down when he should have impaled me with his horns. Upon landing on the ground one of his horns hit a boulder and broke off. Seeing is horn broken laying on the ground sent him in to an even greater frenzy. With a howl so loud, that made me drop to my knee and almost black out from the pressure. The rabbit’s fur turn from white to a deep blood red and started to glow black. After seeing it flex its hind leg all I knew was that I was flying through the air going through about five trees. Thinking to myself that this can’t be good something in my head to me to jump to left. And good thing I did too. The area I just left was none existent. All that was left was a five meter wide crater with the rabbit standing in the center.
“You think you will beat me, think again you fur ball.”
I rush at the rabbit and let lose a full power punch sending the rabbit tumbling back fifty yard. Seeing it stand back up, I brace myself for the oncome charge getting ready to doge when ready. But it was too fast. His speed was at least three times as fast when it was glowing red. I could barely see him now, let along react. At the last second I was able to move my body out of the way of his horn, but his tackle still sent me soaring through the air. Feeling upset that he couldn’t run me through the rabbit appeared in the air behind me swinging his claws. With every swing I could feel is claws ripping throw my shin and muscles. I felt like a pin ball getting hit around in the air with no way to resist the creature. After what felt like an eternity the beast finally shot me down to the ground, leaving my body to make a crafter three feet deep.
‘Am I really going to die like this? Am I going to let my race die out because I couldn’t beat some overgrown fur ball from the lower realm? NO I WILL NOT DIE TO DAY! I need something anything I can use as a weapon.’
“There we go this will do.”
Stand up with all my strength, blood dripping from all over my body I look at the rabbit with undying will. Gathering all my remaining strength I ready myself for the last show down. The rabbit seeing this, sits back on its hind legs gathering strength. He starts to glow a deeper black, with wind and dust twisting up around him. Show him I will not give up and will win I shout with all my strength.
”I AM A LIMBODAN, ONE OF THE PRIMORDIAL RACES, I WILL NOT DIE TO SOME OVERGROWEN FUR BALL.”
As if on cue the rabbit disappeared and a blinding red and golden light erupted. Leaving everything to instinct I thrust my arms forward with all my strength.
DING
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