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I will be doing a rewrite. Vote on things that you want to stay, and things that you want to go, or like to see.

I will be doing a rewrite. Vote on things that you want to stay, and things that you want to go, or like to see.

Things that I need/want to keep the same for the story.

The MC's origin and background.

The MC's lost Memories and Flashbacks.

The MC's introduction into the new world, and how he got there.

The MC eventually getting void powers

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The interface implanted in his head.

Amazons not liking men.

Raven and the fact that she starts off as a slave.

Raven's distrust in men.(she will overcome it gradually faster  with MC)

The Kalesh(wolflike race) Name may change.

Things that will change.

Flashbacks will be labeled and possibly written in gray text.

The pace, the main character will think about his situation more often.

A less insane MC

If you like my ideas or hate them or have something you would like to see, please leave a comment

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