Chapter 3: A Veil
POV – JAKE
As Jake and Trixie continued their journey along the creek, the warmth of the day steadily intensified. The once-clear stream began to meander, its banks gradually surrendering to the sprawling expanse of a marsh. The landscape around them transformed subtly but persistently, the ground beneath their feet growing softer, squelching with each step.
Tall trees still towered above, their roots sprawling like gnarled fingers into the moist soil, while dense clumps of weeds clung stubbornly to the water’s edge. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and decaying vegetation, a pungent aroma that filled Jake’s nostrils and clung to his clothes. Every breath felt heavy in the increasingly muggy atmosphere, and he found himself wiping his brow more often than he liked.
The sounds of the marsh provided a constant, ambient soundtrack to their trek. The distinct croaks of Croagunk and Palpitoad echoed through the air, with eerie and rhythmic amphibious calls. Enormous Gastrodon, with their vividly coloured bodies, sluggishly navigated the aquatic fringes of the marsh, leaving slimy trails in the soft mud as they moved.
With each step, Jake grew more cautious. The ground beneath him was deceptive—solid-looking patches often gave way to the squelch of marshy undergrowth, threatening to swallow his foot whole if he wasn’t careful. His trainers were caked in mud, adding a cumbersome weight to each step, a constant reminder of the Stunfisk, which he certainly did not wish to encounter again.
Above and around him, Trixie seemed full of energy as ever, a bright counterpoint to his struggle. Having shed her fear of flying, she now revelled in the freedom it offered. With grace, she skimmed just above the surface of the marsh, her wings barely brushing the water before she soared upward again. Her flights were punctuated by playful loops and turns, each manoeuvre a display of joy in her newfound confidence. Every time she returned to perch on Jake's shoulder, there was a triumphant gleam in her eyes.
Watching Trixie, Jake couldn't help but feel a pang of envy. Her ability to rise above the mire—both literally and metaphorically—stood in sharp contrast to his own earthbound fortunes.
"You know, Trix," Jake quipped, watching her glide with ease, "if you're going to show off like that, the least you could do is offer to give me a lift."
Trixie landed on his shoulder, chirping "Emol, emolga," which Jake interpreted as, “Sorry, you’re a bit too heavy for me.”
Jake gave his flat stomach an exaggerated pat. "How rude,” he remarked with a wry grin. "You do realise, all those berries are turning me into a shadow of my former self," he continued, his voice laced with mock despair. "At this rate, I'll be looking like an Inteleon!"
Jake furrowed his brow at the notion, a thoughtful expression replacing his usual easy-going demeanour. As he surveyed the marsh stretching before them, he couldn't help but ponder how much farther they would have to go. The squelching mud underfoot and an oncoming light fog beginning to roll in from the marsh made every step feel heavier.
His eyes drifted to the berry bushes dotting the landscape, their bright fruits a sharp contrast to the dull greens and browns of the marsh. Getting to them was becoming a real hassle, though. The ground was so soggy it felt like wading through thick soup, and more than once, Jake had almost lost a shoe to the greedy clutches of the mud.
The Pokémon situation didn’t make things any easier. Jake eyed the Chewtle colonies warily. These Pokémon were scattered all over the marsh, and where there were Chewtle, their evolved form, Drednaw, was never far behind. The Drednaw guarded the berry bushes like fierce little terriers, making it clear they weren’t up for sharing.
Since their run-in with Greedent, Jake and Trixie had faced a few more Pokémon battles. Trixie, with her distinctive typing and exceptional agility, easily outmanoeuvred most opponents, who struggled to land even a single hit on her. But Drednaw, with their rock-hard defences, were a different story. Jake knew that Trixie didn’t have the best matchup against these tough rock-types. Maybe we could handle one or two, he thought, but taking on a whole colony? That’s pushing our luck.
Jake had become more confident in understanding Trixie’s capabilities, though it had taken some trial and error. Through their battles, he had begun to gauge her strength—probably somewhere between level ten and twenty-two, if he were to use in-game terms as a rough measure. It was a wide gap, as there was simply no way to tell without a Pokédex. Maybe I’ll find one someday, he mused. Regardless, he’d pieced together her move set, and while he didn’t have an exact comparison to other Emolga, he could tell she was quite potent, especially with her electric attacks. She’s stronger than most of the Pokémon around here, he noted, but even with her power, there are limits.
He understood why the Pokémon were so protective. In this marshland, food wasn’t exactly lying around for the taking. Everyone—Pokémon and humans alike—had to fend for themselves. Still, it made snagging a quick berry snack way more complicated than it should’ve been.
Jake briefly toyed with the idea of hunting a Pokémon for food but quickly realised the complications. First off, he lacked the necessary tools; capturing a Pokémon without them seemed impossible. Sure, Trixie could probably help, but the thought of asking her to harm another Pokémon for food was unthinkable to him, even though he knew she sometimes ate bug Pokémon. Then there was the second, more significant hurdle: his own nature. Deep down, Jake was too kind-hearted. The idea of eating creatures as intelligent as Pokémon didn't sit well with him. Maybe he'd re-think it later after all, he wasn't exactly a stranger to a good steak back home. But for now, he just couldn't do it. What could he say? It might be shameless, but he was simply not the type to want to meet the cow before eating the burger.
Jake's state of cleanliness—or rather, the lack thereof—certainly wasn’t doing him any favours. Encased in layers of marshland grime, he was a far cry from his usual self. Given the circumstances and the lack of any spot to clean up properly, he was starting to feel like he might be mistaken for a Garbodor if they stumbled upon a town.
Trixie hasn’t seemed to notice yet, Jake thought with a mix of relief and dread. But in his mind's eye, he pictured her reaction—holding her nose, feigning horror at his state, and then turning away in disgust. He imagined himself collapsing to his knees in despair as Trixie walked away from him, dismayed by his filth.
“I’d have to change my name and move to another region,” he thought, convinced that even Pokémon would gossip about his stench.
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Jake's daydream abruptly ended as he caught Trixie's gaze, her nose wrinkling slightly.
He winced, turning away with a muttered "Gah," as a wave of embarrassment washed over him. Fortunately for him, Trixie remained tactfully silent on the matter, judging him only with the occasional sniff.
As Trixie and Jake ventured deeper into the marshy forest, a change began to permeate the air around them. What had started as a thin veil of fog gradually thickened, creeping through the trees and enveloping them in a ghostly shroud. The landscape, once familiar, became barely recognisable as the mist settled, slowly transforming their surroundings into something eerie and unfamiliar.
The trees, which had stood tall and imposing, now loomed oppressively, their trunks taking on increasingly ghastly appearances. Branches, gnarled and twisted, reached out like crooked fingers, as if trying to grasp something unseen. The once vibrant green foliage seemed muted, shrouded in the growing mist, giving the forest an almost monochrome appearance.
"The trees are getting a bit dramatic, don’t you think?" Jake attempted to joke, though his voice carried a hint of unease in the thickening fog.
Trixie, perched on his shoulder, emitted a soft "Emol," a trace of apprehension in her tone.
Jake noticed a sudden drop in temperature, the summer warmth giving way to a clammy chill that did not fit the season. He shivered, instinctively wrapping his arms around himself as he felt an uncomfortable pinprick on the back of his neck, the sensation of being watched creeping into his mind.
Mist began to swirl around them, tendrils curling and uncurling like ghostly fingers. Sounds became muffled and distant, as if the fog wasn’t just obscuring sight but swallowing sound itself. The usual marshland noises were dampened, replaced by a heavy silence that was occasionally punctuated by a distant, unidentifiable rustle or the splash of Jake’s footsteps.
The marsh, once full of Pokémon sounds and life, seemed eerily quiet now. The increasing scarcity of life was unsettling, disturbing.
Jake squinted, trying to make sense of the shapes that seemed to flit just at the edge of his vision, never fully forming but always present.
"Just our imagination, right?" he whispered, more to himself than to Trixie.
"Emol," Trixie chirped in response, her ears flattened against her head, her usual playful tone subdued.
The atmosphere grew heavier, the air thick with a sense of foreboding. Even the trees seemed to lean in closer, their gnarled forms casting unsettling shadows in the fog. The feeling of being watched grew stronger, pressing uncomfortably at the back of Jake’s neck.
From somewhere in the distance, a whisper drifted through the mist, faint and elusive. It teased at the edges of Jake's hearing; a murmur barely discernible over the marsh’s hush. He tilted his head, straining to discern its nature, but it remained just beyond comprehension. With every step, a growing unease gnawed at him, urging him forward yet filling him with dread.
Then, a rustle. The grass beside him quivered as if touched by an invisible hand. Jake's nerves tightened, a knot of apprehension forming in his stomach.
Whisper, whisper. The sounds multiplied, surrounding him in an eerie symphony. Each murmur seemed to brush against his ears, a ghostly caress that left him shivering.
He glanced at Trixie, her wide eyes mirroring his own trepidation. Their shared look was a wordless exchange of fear and uncertainty.
Rustle, rustle, rustle. The noise grew, movement seemed to encircle them. Grass blades danced as if to a sinister tune, something unseen and ominous pulling the strings.
"Trix, get ready," Jake’s voice was a low, urgent command, slicing through the thickening tension.
Rustle, rustle. Whisper, whisper, whisper. The sounds converged, forming an auditory vortex that swirled around Jake and Trixie, each rustle and whisper amplifying their rising panic. The forest seemed to close in on them, the whispers and rustles unrelenting in the heart of the mist.
Then, abruptly, silence.
The sudden absence of sound was more terrifying than the whispers had been. Jake's heart pounded in his ears, the only noise in a world gone mute. The mist clung to him, cold and damp, wrapping him in a suffocating embrace.
He stood there, frozen, every sense heightened. Trixie’s presence on his shoulder offered a slight comfort, but it did little to dispel the suffocating fear. The silence stretched on, oppressive and suffocating. Jake's breaths came in sharp, ragged pulls, his eyes darting frantically, searching the impenetrable fog for any sign of movement.
In that silence, in that moment of suspended terror, the world held its breath. And Jake knew, with chilling certainty, that they were not alone.
Thud! A sound resonated softly through the fog, deep and muffled, vibrating the very air. Jake tensed, rooted to the spot as the rhythmic thuds continued, growing steadily louder, closer.
Thud! A massive outline began to emerge from the mist. Towering and vast, it loomed above, segmented and undulating slightly with each step.
Thud! The ground reverberated with the sound. A broad, curved shape hinted at a formidable jawline, slowly growing out of the mist. The creature's head was massive, dwarfing Jake entirely. Two backward-arching horns protruded from its forehead, giving it a demonic visage.
Thud! Below the horns, two faintly glowing spots pierced the fog, like embers smouldering in the grey. Their gaze, though obscured by the haze, was unmistakably fixed on Jake, sending a shiver down his spine.
THUD!
Frozen, Jake stared at the creature before him, his mind racing, heart pounding in his chest.
"I’m in deep now, aren’t I?"
POV - ???
It watched. It watched from behind the veil of fog, its eyes fixated on the two figures making their way through the mire. It knew not their names, only that they were there, and It was here.
It saw the tall one, trudging heavily, his steps laboured and slow. It saw the smaller one, flitting about with a grace It lacked. It did not like this. It watched their interactions—their laughter, their camaraderie. It hated this.
It followed. Always a shadow, always unseen. It moved with stealth. They would never see. It giggled. It was hidden by the fog and the gnarled trees. It observed their every move, every word, every chuckle. With each passing moment, Its hatred grew.
The tall one wiped his brow, laughed, spoke words It couldn’t hear but could imagine. The smaller one responded with chirps, perching on his shoulder. It saw something between them. It did not know what it was. But It wanted it. It hated it.
As they progressed towards the haunted forest, the feeling inside It intensified. It needed it, and It would have it. For the first time in Its existence, a desire was born. A desire to disrupt, to destroy. It imagined the small one separated from the tall one, lost and alone. It imagined the tall one alone, isolated, staring at It. Calling Its name.
It giggled at the thought, a sound that could have been a sobbing cry or a hysterical laugh. It would make them pay for having each other. It would bring them sorrow, for in their sorrow, It would have Its chance. It would hate. And in doing so, maybe It would find Its own place, Its own connection.
The haunted forest loomed ahead, a place where shadows danced and whispers lived. They had come to Its home. It would welcome them—Full hospitality would be given. It giggled again, this time sounding like a whisper.
It would weave Its plan. The fog thickened, and It moved closer, Its steps silent, Its resolve firm. The time was coming, and It would be ready. It knew what else lived here. It hated them as well, but they would be useful.
It knew nothing of the past, nothing of the future. But It knew this—It would no longer be just a watcher. It would be a disruptor, a bringer of despair. It would BREAK them. For in their loss, in their destruction, perhaps It would find something akin to joy.