Hey just wanted to let people know that I went back through the story and tried out spacing the paragraphs apart more. So hopefully now its easier to read. i am currently working on the next chapter which will be heading back to Tony and seeing how she's handling things on her side of the fence.
Also about units of measurments and such. Deans chapters will use metric units for distances, heights and such. However in describing somones height will still be using imperial (aka Feet). As for Tony, miles will be the distance unit used, and for anyone who is curious a mile is 1.6 Kilometres, but otherwise metric will again be the standard. It shouldnt be too confusing just remember. Just know States are imperial while the vast majority of the rest of the world is metric and I will try to balance as such. Honestly there isnt really a reason but just because I want to and I personally feel small things like that add to the realism of the world. Cool so I think I've put in the required 500 characters to post.
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-Serin-