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Plague Bringer
Rewrite chapter 1

Rewrite chapter 1

First part to the rework, currently trying to figure out how to delete the past chapters, should figure it out soon.I did my best to try to capture the character of Tikir here, but I'm not sure how it worked out, I think it's alright though, interesting atleast.

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"Oh wow, you thought that you could actually escape me?" A young woman, who had long platinum blond hair said as she looked down upon me, a look of disgust upon her face.

 As I try to move her foot which was currently upon my throat, she stepped down with even more force. "Oh~ Trying to confront me with strength? What happened to your special 'Skills?' You think that you can do anything to me? What a joke." She said while a white light gathered in her hand, so bright it was nearly blinding.

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 Why is it that I always remember that scene... But I guess its a good thing, as that means the seal has finally begun to weaken. That pitiful harlot, she really thought she could seal me forever? Preposterous. She doubted my power that much? "fufufufu" I start laughing to myself.

 'She thought that her "purity" could withstand my power, the power that erodes both bodies and minds?' I thought to myself as I reach through the chains that bind me, the once pure white chains are now almost completely black.

 As I reach my hand forward I grab upon the core to this whole formation, which was basically a ball of silver light. As I grab it, it begins to turn green, followed by black, and then it shatters, the chains following behind it shortly.

 "It's time now.... How long has it been? A hundred years? Or was it two hundred..?" I say while finally stretching again for the first time since I was thrown in this 'seal'.

 "Ah... What should be first on the agenda? Shall I destroy her church? Lay waste to the lands? Kill the other irritating bitch who kept pestering me?" I muse to myself while walking around the desolate room which I came to know.

 As I reach the wall, which was made out of blocks of stone, it shatters and I find myself closing my eyes from the light that pierces down upon me, as I look around I find that I'm on a mountain, the same mountain where I used to call my home.

 The once beautiful temple where I used to reside is now nothing but a shameful ruin, a disgrace of its once magnificent form. The once pure black stones that covered the outer layer of it, is now nothing but rubble, covered in vines and moss.

 "Oh how beauty can be tarnished... Lets see if she becomes like this next?" I say as I look down, realizing my stature is about half as big as I was before.

 "Ah.. It looks like I may have used more power than I thought." I thought aloud as I looked upon my hand, which looks to be that of a childs.

 'I wonder how long it'll take to return to my true form..' I think to myself as I hear rustling in the forest beside me. As I stand there, pondering what it may be, I see a group of three individuals, two men, and one woman, coming out of the forest.

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 As they spot me, they have a bewildered look upon their faces. Almost as if they're shocked by the fact that someone else is up here.

 They start talking to eachother in hushed voices, which I could barely make out. "Is she the cause of it?" the one man asked to the other "I don't know... Should we kill her just to be sure?" the second man replied.

 "Killing her would be such a waste, shouldn't we just capture her and sell her as a slave? She looks like she will grow into a beauty... If we sold her we wouldn't have to worry about money for the next few years." The woman replied indifferently.

 The men agree to her, and then she starts walking towards me, a smile plastered on her face. "Hello there, little girl. What happened? Did you get lost?" She asked, in a voice that was trying to be comforting "If you come with me, I can bring you back home." She said as she was reaching towards my right shoulder.

 "Such insolence, you believe you have the right to touch me?" I replied.

 "You see, I was in a pleasant mood for once, and I was going to let you live, but if you don't value your life that much, I can comply with you wishes." I said as I grabbed her wrist with enough force that it broke her skin, the blood that should only be dripping out of the small wound, was instead flowing out at a rapid pace.

 She tried to pull her hand back as she jumped back in shock, only making her injury that much worse, the once small wound becoming a laceration down her hand.

 As her blood flows out, it doesn't fall straight down, instead it circles around my free hand. When she screams in panic, it finally releases the men from their thoughts of wealth, and they come running towards me swords drawn.

 As I notice this, the blood which is revolving around my hand switches color, from its original red, to a light green. By the time they try to slash at me with their swords, it was too late.

 The blood turned into green spikes that went shooting towards them, impaling them in their chest before they even had a chance to react.

 The area where it pierced them slowly begins to turn green, and rapidly begins to decay, from the pain they both stumble, falling onto the ground while screaming loudly.

 "Ah... What a wonderful melody you play for me today. This song of pain, why does it have to end?" I ask myself.

 In this time, the woman who was originally trying to grab me, turns and tries to run, the blood flowing from her wound still not stopping. But by the time she reached the trees behind her, she fell face first. The loss of blood making her to where she can't even move. The screams of agony finally halting, I began to grow bored of this.

 The two men, who were once in shape, are no more, merely a pile of dust remains in the position where their body once was.

 . 'Ah... so boring" I thought to myself as I began to walk in the direction they came from.

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