Greetings Readers and Critics,

a new Author arrived with fresh written trash treasures. To warn you beforehand english is my third language and I started with the story to work on it. Now I want also share my story with you to get some feedback. I will give my best and try to keep my mistakes at bay.

The story is a sequel for "Destinyless" from a trilogie on which I work. Destinyless is currently only written in german but the storys work with eachother and try to show the same world from different views. Later on there may be some hints and gimmicks working with the background knowledge provided by the first book. But if I feel confident enough I will provide a translation of the unfinished book.  

Best regards Maniacx.

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Updates:

1#Rewritten Prolog and Chapter 1.

Sketches

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