Hey guys author here so ya for anyone reading my story hope ya like it and enjoy part 2 and the girl might not come up for a while.
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Talos just stood there for what seemed like hours upon hours seeing the houses burn one by one each playing upon the inferno of death, each house holding his childhood memories: going to the lake for the first time with his baby sister, winning a tournament of hide and seek, getting appraised and finding out head had a large talent for earth magic and seeing his parents cry for joy that their son was a genius, my 10th birthday with my sister saying happy birthday to me and giving me a big hug, seeing everyone I knew and love die while I still stand.
His trance was broken by his sister tugging on his shirt with a scared look in her eyes.
Talos what’s happening?! I'm scared (Katie)
It's a… bandit raid, but why here, why know, why anything! (Talos)
Talos sat there for a minute then regained his composure
Brother come on we have to save them! (Katie)
Startled by his sisters plead he nodded and grabbed a thick looking stick from the ground and ran towards the blazing buildings with his sister to try save someone, anyone… just something of their village.
“DAAAAANG” (You all know what this means) a arrow was shot by one of the bandits heading towards Katie’s head while all he could do was watch, watch the cruel thing known as slow motion seeing the arrow hit her head immediately causing her head to explode like a water melon getting caught in too many rubber bands (Link to see what I mean) spraying her blood all over his body.
Katie NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Talos (duh who else would it be the now dead other villagers?) Quickly Talos fled in sorrow and fear, ocean's coming out of his eyes as he ran.
Why me, why me?! All I ever did was help my family and pray to the gods, so why me!!!!! I promise sis on your grave that I will avenge you! I will find whoever did this and take revenge on them I swear! With that a blood oath of vengeance formed on his hand giving him strength to go on.
As he stumbled in the forest he found a cave and decided to rest there for the night, murmuring in sleep things like a will kill you and noooooooooo.
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The next day:
Talos woke up to see a golden eyed fox with a luxurious blond pelt staring at him as if it were looking in his soul…
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Talos stumbled up in freight and backed away from the creature
“Boy do you know who’s cave you're in?” Asked a feminine voice seemly coming from the fox
“You to..talk?!” Asked Talos for he knew that beasts had to be a least ranked S in order to communicate humans.
“Of course I do you fool! I'm Lokix the legendary Golden Tailed Fox!”
“Never heard of you”
“Well than let me enlighten you about me before I kill you”
After having a longgggggggg one sided conversation with the fox he came up with an idea(Not a good one)
Suddenly he threw himself to the toes of the fox
“Please teach me your oh amazing ways grand fox let this fly serve you in any way possible, just please teach me so I can have revenge!” Cried Talos on the ground
“Fine you may serve me *himmmmp*”
“Oh thank you, oh thank you”
“As a tasty snack”
With that the golden eyed fox ate his soul while it tasted rather good actually very crunchy yet still creamy, sweet but still sour, and had a nice lemon tang to it “ohhh mmmm delicious”
His last words were “why?” as his body hit the ground with a nice squish.
“Idiot as if I would train you someone who could kill me, what are you insane?” with that she devoured his flesh, regretting it since it actually gave her negative levels since his level was so low.”
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So how did you like the ending I bet all of you thought it was going to be too cliche MWHAHAHAH
Any ways pls rate and follow thank you very much. Also damm I just realized how hard it is to write a full chapter since this is about ¼ of a normal chapter, what did I just get myself into? F*****k, Next post should be on thursday don't worry it will be the size I plan to write in.