So hey fuel2rock here just want to say that I'll be adding a chapter around 3 pm or around 5 

This next chapter should be considerably longer and I wanted ask for a few comments of how the first few chapters came out I will be developing my characters in more depth and a bit of a back story after this next chapter heh sorry spoiler 

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Anyway thx hope your looking forward to the next chapter