Hey all! Unfortunately, I am going to have to put this story down for now. I jumped too quickly into it and want to give you all the best tale I can following these characters, so this iteration will be left on hiatus. I will rewrite it as time goes on but I think my lack of experience writing was starting to push the story away from what I wanted, resulting in a rushed couple chapters. Since I've already released this much a few details might change but luckily it is still pretty fresh, meaning it shouldn't take too long to recover. I plan to use the suggestions in the comments to correct the chapters and improve my pacing, and I will be setting a firm schedule for my next attempt. Alongside it I might put up another story to help buffer my mind and keep myself on task. I appreciate you all for reading this far, and hope you stay with me when I start the Official Form of this world's tale.
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