Authors note... This is the rewritten chapter 2. i have still 3 days of holiday and i try to get at least 1 chap each day and i try to get at least 10 chapters at the end of the month.
Well... I must say i quite like this version, but i know i need to get better at writing. so Please tell me what you think and IF you have time, please notify me of grammar mistakes
With love: Troller Fi
Ps: Armo means mercy in Finnish
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Mastermind
Chapter 2 : A
???: So.... You have come...
Armo heard a whisper... cold, ancient....
Armo: "not really my choice, tell your buddy that i'm thankful for last second save, but he should at least heal me before sending me to the hands of death itself, A warrior like me would like at least to look death in the eye"
Suddenly, Armo heard an cold laugh in front of him
Death:"HA HA HA HA....quite innocent words for a man who has send so many to meet me."
Armo was confused.( This is virtual reality....it's not real....why is he talking like it's...)
Death: "Real?" Death finished armo's thought, and continued, "But my child it is real, at least for me and everyone else. expect you."
Armo: "What do you want?"
Death: "To talk." death said and Armo felt something on front of his eyes
System notice!
Your Eyes have been regrown!
Blindess debuff removed
+100Hp
Armo open his eyes to notice that the room looked like an 16th century Japanese castle, with an tea table in front of him.
on the opposite side of the table, sat an old man, who could be defined by two words "Ancient" and "Powerful"
without doubt, in front of Armo, was Death.
Death: "Please sit down" Death said while gesturing to a free seat i next to Armo
Armo sat down on the chair and took an sip of the tea
Armo: What do you want to talk about?"
Ping*
Quest notice
You have received a quest
"A chat with Death"
Do to your high infamy and your past deeds
you have been noticed by Death.
He wants to have chat with you
Quest difficulty: F- to S++ (Depends on Deaths view to you)
Difficulty right now: F-¨
Quest requirements: High infamy, The title "Soulless Monster"
Quest reward: Higher or lower intimacy with Death, Race change and ????
This quest can't be declined
You have accepted the quest "A chat with Death"
Armo raised an brow and looked at Death doubtfully.
Death: "Oh, so it worked. Good i was worried i would need to explain the quest system before telling what i want to talk about"
Armo:"i see, so normally i can decide if accept or not?"
Death:"Yes, and i want to talk to you about your name"
Armo lay down a´the cup down to the table and growled at Death, a ballsy move for an lvl 1
Armo:"What about it"
Death sighed and lay'd down his cup and looked at Armo with his cold, black eyes
Death"No need to get mad, i just want to know if you want live up to your name."
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Armo, now shocked asked "What do you mean?"
Death: "I mean what i say. I want you, Armo Aka Alexis Stone Aka "Mastermind" to take a path of retribution. I want you to become and anger of mercy and Retribution, who give mercy to the weak, sick and tortured and offer retribution to those guilty of their sins."
Ping*
You have been offered a race change to "Angel of mercy and Retribution"
Do you accept?
Yes/No
Armo looked at the screen dumbfounded not able to speak anything. Then it hit him. The Guilt.
Armo:"All those lives... i took them...Are you giving me a chance to redeem myself?"
Death:"Redeem? No. a chance to stop others to make the same mistakes you did? Yes."
Armo:"But you aren't even real...." Armo whispered while looking down at his cup
Death:"But child, this is real. for me, and you too. Do you not remember? You were killed. This is your new reality"
Armo:"I see.." Armo muttered as he remembered The Last words that he ever heard an the bullet going through his brain...
Armo looked Death into his eyes those 2 dark,deep abysses.... and whispered"May god have mercy on mine soul"¨ amd gave his answer
I ACCEPT!
You have accepted race change to "Angel of mercy and retribution"
Ping*
System notice!
Due to the changes to your race
The title "Soulless Monster" has been rewoked
Ping*
System notice!
Due to the changes to your race
You have gained following stats
Willpower acuired!
Willpower +2
Int +3
Wis+5
Armo was taken aback by the new flood of information, but after carefully reading them all he dismissed them by saying "Dismiss"
Death suddenly got up and smiled at Armo as warmly a embodiment of Death can
Death: i have seen your resolve and i would like to give you an gift he said while giving Armo an rusty scythe
Ping*
Quest notice!
Quest "A chat with Death has been finished"
Rewards: Intimacy with Death +10
Race: An Angel of Mercy and Retribution
Item: "The Nameless" (Unbound)
You have geined 10 silver
You have gained 200 exp
Death: "Now....Shall we get started"
Death said while holding out his hand for Armo
Ping*
Chapter 2 End
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BOO! Hey guys! Hope you liked the chapter. i decided that our dear "Mastermind" will go on a path of retribution,
Tell me what you think of my decision in the comments..
See you tomorrow!