Now I know this may be a disappointment to a lot of people (well like maybe 50), but I can't keep writing. I thought it would be awesome, writing about a daredevil like character with awesome mana in a sci-fi fantasy hybrid world. I had so much planned for the story, but I hit a major wall when trying to introduce the main character to the city. When you can only see in a small circle around you, its really hard to capture a city setting, especially on the scale I wanted it to be. I thought it would be a cool idea, but it simply doesn't work. I've been trying for the past three days to write the next chapter, and nothing seems to work. I either feel like the quality dropped, its just plain awkward, or it simply doesn't work. I do this as a fun passtime and to fulfill some fantasies I have always wanted, but if I'm not happy with what I'm doing, I'm not going to force myself to do it. I know it may sound like shitty reason, but it is what it is. Again, sorry for leaving it so early, but it simply doesn't work. I might try writing again with similar characters and setting but without the Mana Sense. It would be much easier to do the world building and would make it seem better. What I had envisioned really wasn't working out. If I do restart with another story, I would still release it on this account, but it wouldn't be until I had finished probably the first arc.

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