Hello everyone, this is Ren Lumino!
I have an important announcement regarding Madougu: Rise of The Fallen. After reviewing the early chapters and considering feedback about pacing and excitement, I’ve decided to restructure the first four chapters.
What’s Changing?
* Chapter 01 and 02 have been merged and condensed into a single Chapter 01 (with a thrilling action flash-forward scene still intact).
* Chapter 03 becomes the new Chapter 02, and Chapter 04 becomes the new Chapter 03, and so on.
* Long flashback scene about Haruto and Kanna’s first meeting on a crowded train has been drastically shortened in Chapter 01. The other long flashback scene about Haruto and Kanna struggled to get out of the crowded train will be moved to later chapter in the shortened version.
* The revised Chapter 01–04 has been published already, replacing the current chapters. Future chapters (05–07, etc.) will follow the updated continuity.
* These changes will help the early chapters focus more on the first main conflict and fast-paced intense scenes, ensuring a more engaging experience for new readers.
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Why the Revision?
* Many readers have been looking for a faster and more intense start.
* This will give a clearer hook and showcase the supernatural threat earlier.
* Don’t worry—Haruto and Kanna’s detailed backstory hasn’t disappeared! You’ll still find shorter flashback moments in the revised and upcoming chapters to give you the necessary context. For those who want the full, detailed extended flashback, I’ll be sharing it as a side-story on Patreon for ELITE members and above later. It provides extra insight into their relationship.
How It Affects You
* If you’re a new reader, you won’t notice any confusion—just a tighter, more streamlined opening.
* If you’ve already read the original Chapters 1–4, you’re welcome to re-read the revised versions. Don’t worry—the core storyline remains the same; it’s just arranged to improve pacing, clarity and dialogues.
Schedule Going Forward
* I’m currently on a short hiatus to build a solid chapter backlog. Expect me to resume posting regularly (twice a week) starting on March 05, 2025.
* View the hiatus announcement here:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/chapter/2005677
Thank you for your patience, continued support and understanding.
I’m excited to present this refined opening to Madougu: Rise of The Fallen, and I hope you’ll enjoy it!
Let's live in the story together,
— Ren Lumino —