waking up,daniel's mind was still in a daze. the images of what happened before he fainted were like nightmares in his head,but looking around he knew it was all real. people were lying all around with torn cloths and daggers in their hands,al tho they all seemed to be fully healed,you could still see the fear in most of their eyes
looking around they were in a big white hall.no doors,no windows,just hundreds of people laying around and almost all of them are unconscious .thinking about the number of people he could see daniel was suprised.out of 100000 people at least few thousands should still be alive.
thinking about this daniel noticed words in the side of his vision
"points:136"
"letter of introduction,open y/n"
looking at his number of points he understood he probably killed alot.he could only remember vague images of what happened.altho he had some fights with other kids to the point of them bleeding hard it couldn't compare to killing.but in reality , he felt nothing,and it made him think about himself.he knew it was wrong,but he really just felt nothing while taking others life.
sighing he then proceeds to the letters he focused the"letter of introduction" the words became bigger and came to the middle of his view.with 2 options yes/no in front of him.choosing yes he started to read.
"Congratulations,you are not dead!
you may just be the start for the new age of mankind! fighting to survive you have succeeded in passing to the next stage, i know you are eager to go on another fight,the blood the adrenaline, like who doesn't like it? but sadly you will have to wait abit"
reading this this part of the letter daniel Laughed in his mind
"so thats how our god is really is ha.."
getting back to read he saw
"this place is what you could call "heaven" the place you all dreamed to be in,in my opinion its a bit boring.
as there are no doors or windows there are still rooms waiting for you.to get to your room all you have to say is "teleport to room" and you will be teleported to your room,simple right?
immediately after saying "teleport to room" daniel found himself in a white room,it could be called a mini version of the hall before as again he found nothing inside,not even doors and windows.
"you may wonder "how empty white rooms are heaven?" but again,worry not. just by thinking about how you want your room to be looked like you can have whatever room you want! your old room from home,a big palace,or even a jail cell to those of us who like it hardcore.
inside the rooms you too will be able to spend the points you gained from the previous tutorial for food,weapon,armors and so on but for today,they food will be free.no need to thank us!.
accsess for the shop will be only during your stay at the room,as for way of getting back to the room,that we will tell you in the future
as you can make anything you've seen before appear in your room,only the items you buy with points can go out of it. for now you may rest,one day later,we will tell you how to process from here,sorry for the time you need to wait in this boring place.
in best regards,gabriel(note:like,who else could be better than the trickster himself?)
just after reading the last word the letter disappeared,doing as told in the letter he closed his eyes and thought about his room back home. small room with the size of 12x30,one big white closer standing left to the door. in the other side of the room was a bed with a computer in the middle. jumping on to the bed he didn't need anything more.
looking at the side of his vision he could see new things appeared
"points:136"
"status"
"shop"
looking at the new buttons he immediately knew what it meant.back at earth before he started to train martial arts he liked to play games.actually starting to train martial arts was partly because the games he played. back then he thought life was boring,other then traveling the world later on he would not be able to do much exciting things,so games were like the way of escape for him.
pressing the status button,words appeared
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name "daniel cena(n:im really bad with names..)
age:16
race:human
str:9"+"
agi:11"+"
vit:10"+"
int:8"+"
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taking a look on his status,he could expect the average man to be 5 on everything,that was because he knew how his abilities were in compare to others.
pressing the + near his str,it became 10.taking a look at number of points it was now 131.
"so the rate of points is 1:5" he said with "as expected" tone.
to get his status took really hard training over few years,and he knew his number of points must be really high in compared to other,so if it was 1:1 it was just too easy.."
looking at the grey stats,after long time of playing games he expected one of them to be "mana",
taking a look at the shop a list showed up
1:armors
2:weapons
3:powers
4:bloodlines
looking at the short explanation of every category he saw
armour:
"wide selection of normal and enchanted armors,helmets...."
weapons:
"wide selection of normal and enchanted sword,bows,daggers..."
powers:
"wide selection of powers such as,fire magic,ice magic,summoning,telekinesis,qi,...
beware before choosing 2 powers,as they might clash with one another and destroy the host"
bloodlines:
"different bloodline may change your race and will give you different traits.beware before getting a bloodline for it may clash with a power in your body"
looking at the different items he knew he was lucky to have so much points
and so he bought
1: steel katana for 20 points.
2:beginner level qi,which came with a small qi pool and the ability to feel qi for 80 points.
and 6 points in agility
by what the angel said he knew something even worse then before will come later,he knew he was really lucky to have so much points as he got qi,a power.99% of the people that survived probably didnt even have a weapon other then the small dagger.he didnt even know when he would be able to use the shop again
and because he trained with the katana before,it was the best weapon for him.
and as he, himself was a martail artist,even if in training, he knew he had to buy qi.
and so he fell asleep
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waking up he saw no notifications in the sides of his vision so he knew he still had time to train.
train in what?
even after getting qi no real knowledge came to his head. while buying the power he just felt a warm feeling overflowing in his body,but then nothing.
he got off the bed and sat on the floor,sitting in a meditation position he closed his eyes.
sitting in the middle of a small room could be seen a youth, with black hair reaching his shoulders and green eyes.he could not be called handsome but not an ugly one either.wearing black tshirt and black pants with marks of blood on them.
seconds by seconds,minutes by minutes,
trying to feel qi is like trying to feel something you know is there,but have no idea what it is or how it looks like.
after unknown amount of time he started to feel something,like ants all over his body.
..
his body fell asleep.
"i never expected it to be easy,but really,not even a small manual to help"
suddenly a ding could be heard and word showed up in the sides of his vision
"time to hunt some eggs!"
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so yeh,information chapters are boring but i had to/:
AND GO SUPERNATURAL (gabirel <3)
in the first chapter i said i couldnt fall asleep
so i really couldn't and wrote the second chapter. now i am tired as hell
like i said before. reviews,criticize would be welcomed! all i want is to improve both my english and writing!
btw-im going to make the shop as a "rize" that will be rare for people to use
so most of them will just have to find powers themselves as the place they will go to
will have both mana and qi.