So I'm thinking about re-writing this story. When I first started it I was doing it out of boredom and as a means to vent some frustration creatively. While I have done accomplished both of my original goals, I never expected so many others to enjoy my amature attempts at writing. Looking back on the earlier chapters versus the newer ones I feel that my grammar has improved, but still I think the story could be made better. 

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I appreciate everyone that has commented, followed, or wrote a reveiw. So I would like to know if you think I should scrap this story and re-write it. If I should continue as is, or do some heavy editing on the earlier chapters to clean them up and improve them.