Okay, so it seems like the subplot will not gosh darn come out and I have to go with the original story as I wrote it the first time with just improvements and changes that start after he meets Gatestride. I'm gonna post the Outline-that-could-have-been on the subplot and we'll get to the good news about an upcoming story that I haven't posted yet!
Old Man Herbal's sudden appearance and the dire news.
The activation of the teleportation formation amidst the Family's panic.
Spiritward and Daisyara's decision to send their family to safety, with Daisyara going first through the portal.
The abrupt closure of the portal and the chilling voice promising destruction, leaving Daisyara and her son Pitt trapped on the other side.
Daisyara's realization that Spiritward, Pitt, and Old Man Herbal have perished.
The surge of despair forms a relentless need vengeance.
(time skip)
Daisyara's efforts to become strong enough to destroy the sect responsible for her family's demise in the future.
She continues her journey of Qi cultivation.
(Time skip)
Daisyara abruptly decides to abandon her ability to emote or feel emotions at all besides ones that would fuel her revenge and uses the emotions sacrificed to boost her cultivation talent.
Daisyara faces the harsh realities of the martial and cultivation world where only the strong survive.
(Timeskip)
Daisyara's investigation into the sect, uncovering clues about who they are, only having the name of Old man Herbal's pseudonym 'Old Alchemist Ninth Herbal-Heaven' and the fact that he was their enemy as a clue.
Encounter with her first obstacle, a low-level outer sect disciple.
(Time skip)
Daisyara's dedication to her training, pushing her body, spirit and soul to the breaking point.
A significant breakthrough in her cultivation leads to enhanced abilities that seem unnatural and stem from herself and not a technique.
The realization that her power is growing, but the sect remains an impossible foe.
Daisyara's solitary journey with the society's undercurrents of betrayal and deceit as she is derailed by an assassins guild.
She encounters a pair of disciples who hint at a possible path to confronting the sect, only to discover this is a trap for her.
Daisyara's refusal to form bonds or seek allies, maintaining her resolve to go it alone.
A confrontation with an inner sect disciple occurs.
Daisyara's willingness to sacrifice everything to achieve her vengeance is displayed.
Near-death experience that pushes her into a new realm that deviates from immortality seeking but increases her power tremendously upon nearly dying. surviving by the skin of her teeth, she uses his blood essence to gain more talent and accelerate her growth again.
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Daisyara's relentless training, her breakthroughs, and the increased scrutiny from the cultivation world as her power grows.
Her deepening knowledge of the Shadowdeath Sect's inner workings from stealing disciples increases.
Daisyara's intense training leads her to an ancient and secret realm of someone who mastered the Dao of samsara to an impressive degree.
The Discovery of the Samsara Sorting Spike provides her with an ability that will boost her growth rapidly. The requirement is to use it with the goal of killing her greatest enemy and dying in the same fight. Activating it under those circumstances will allow her to select her next life's circumstances.
She immediately moves to the Shadowdeath sect's mountain, Her journey up the mountain is full of a constant trail of what is now fodder to her.
as she faces sect members who have committed unspeakable acts to join the sect's ranks she finds that the test to join the inner sect is to kill your best friend or to have made no friends at all and is disgusted.
Each sect member she encounters is a murderer who has proven their loyalty and ruthlessness to the Shadowdeath Sect by killing a close friend so she knows that even if she could still feel emotion, she wouldn't for these monsters. She stops holding back and drains all of them of blood essence and cultivation.
Daisyara kills her way up the mountain as the Samsara Selection Spike glows brighter and brighter with a ghostly blue.
Her body is empowered by all the disciples she killed and is able to kill the peak Nascent soul leader easily despite her power not even being close. She tears out her heart and dies while placing it on upon the spike she killed him with. Daisyara finds herself in a void filled with mist. ['Mist offshoot invitation token accepted. Please select the mist user who invited you: Warning this is the trial period and you will not remember this life. 1.(Token create????) 2. Spiritward.]
Okay, with that thing that will happen in the background and maybe be posted in as a quick flashback sequence once I get to writing the first scene into existence(I don't know, honestly) we're moving on to talking about my other story.
Do you want a time loop within a timeloop with overpowered and insurmountable calamities just over the horizon?
Do you want a protagonist who will USE the timeloop and wont care about dying as long as he gains enough power?
Do you want a Sassy lady who roasts all her enemies verbally before killing them as the love interest Who is totally not secretly bonkers due to dying a few too many times in the timeloop as well?
Do you want a blonde with the power of being a battle-dere and has a dangerously unique anger-management method as a personality but is totally not insane I promise as the second love interest?
Do you want a story with way too many training arcs that are actually large plotlines that are really exciting and fun?
Are you ready for an adventure of a life-time OVER AND OVER where nothing is as it seems and the protagonists keep their gains across loops?
Do you want realistic relationship dialogue where they actually argue like goddamn normal people?
Wellllllll I HAVE AN UPCOMING STORY FOR YOU!
Keep an eye out for Rise of the Sword God: Successors SOOOOOON!
(The patreon version is not accurate and I edited it ALOT. I'll be posting it all there while RR gets the submission.) Thank you guys for being patient and I will try to get this specific story done soon.)